Naughty and Nice, for Pennydreadful

Dec 21, 2011 10:29

Title: Naughty and Nice
Author: PantsOnFire aka Diane (dswdiane)
Written for: Pennydreadful
Characters/Pairings: Duncan/Amanda, Duncan/Methos, hint of Duncan/Methos/Amanda
Rating: PG-13 (language, no explicit sex, some kissing, partial nudity)
Warnings: Major schmoop alert.
Author's Notes: See end. Super thanks to my utterly amazing, insightful, helpful, ( Read more... )

amanda, methos, slash, threesome, duncan, 2011 fest, het

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bearshorty December 21 2011, 16:05:52 UTC
Having just gone to the mall a week before Christmas I understand Methos' reluctance. You captured that shopping atmosphere perfectly. And Amanda was brilliant here - shopping, burning pants, stealing necklaces. So many goodies in these lines.

I love this story. I have a weakness for first time stories and Duncan is particularly adorable here trying to find the words while starting to flirt and discombobulate Methos.

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dkwilliams December 21 2011, 16:46:19 UTC
Lovely story - and I'm with Methos. Avoid the malls at all costs. I loved Amanda stealing back the necklace she had given Rebecca (got a little misty eyed there) and it's a gorgeous necklace. I loved the bit where Duncan says that the flirting & touching stopped and he didn't know how to start it again. Of course Methos had an answer for that! I loved Amanda listening in and then going off to get her own happy ending. And ending with what Duncan had said to Amanda in the final series episode was such a nice touch. Loved it to pieces.

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hafital December 21 2011, 17:16:40 UTC
I absolutely loved this! So charming, and fun dialogue. And slightly flustered and awkward Duncan is always a good thing. :D So many fun bits, too many to quote, although I think "My Dear Duncan," was probably my favorite. Thank you!

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pat_t December 21 2011, 17:50:55 UTC
Pretty necklace too. I love the first time stories and it turned out perfectly.

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anya2112 December 21 2011, 18:38:07 UTC
YAZ...the red pants are no more!!!
Fun story! Really enjoyed reading this. I agree about the mall....avoid at all costs!

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