[Oneshot] Needed like the Sun

Jul 31, 2009 09:32

The school’s ground looked so small from the rooftop. Everyone’s so little, like marching ants.

And the pavements don’t look all that scary from up above, Nino thought. Maybe it’s not that bad to jump down from here.

Nino had both of his legs over the edge of the building, sitting lifelessly and staring into nothing in particular.

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sun, au, highschool, ninomiya kazunari, ohno satoshi, life, ohmiya

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amandar91 July 31 2009, 04:14:30 UTC
this was really cute.
poor nino, im sure ohno will make him happy now! and give him reason to live.
what's a prefect? ah i feel like a loser. aren't they in harry potter or something? lol

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hkrym July 31 2009, 04:24:06 UTC
Thank you~~!

Ohno will make him happy all right~~

And don't be that way. Prefect. I thought I used the right term.
(I did, right?)

Yeah, in Harry Potter, Ron and Hermione were one too, they are someone who's responsible in making sure that the school's discipline is followed by other students.

Did that help?
Heheh.

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amandar91 July 31 2009, 05:24:50 UTC
yes it did help! :)
im not really familiar with harry potter.
but when i read the word prefect i remembered seeing ron's older brother running around telling people to go to bed and stuff. lol. he was one right? aha

anyways..
write more more more!
i love au highschool ohmiya!

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hkrym July 31 2009, 05:42:44 UTC

I would really like to write more but you know, my homework's glaring daggers at me right now...

but I'll try to write when I get ideas~ ^_^

thanks again

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magicalsong July 31 2009, 04:47:05 UTC
Waah, this is a real superb fic, if it's only your first.

Nyaa, Suicidal!Nino♥ xP
When I first read the summary, I for sure thought it said " Perfect Ohno" and I was like :D, ' Oh-chan is indeed perfect' xD Well, he's still awesome either way :3

Thanks for the fic! I enjoyed it! ^-^v

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hkrym July 31 2009, 05:11:54 UTC
Thank you~~!

I should have known that the word prefect is just too close to perfect...

but yeah, I agree that Oh-chan's just perfect~~

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mizuko_sakurai July 31 2009, 05:00:42 UTC
This is the best ohmiya fic I've read in along time! It's just so sweet i love it!! For some reason I really liked the licking that ohno did.

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hkrym July 31 2009, 05:06:21 UTC
Thank you for reading~~!!

And I'm sure Ohno liked the licking he did himself~ XD

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tenshimitsuki July 31 2009, 05:39:57 UTC
That was a real cute fic ^^. Suicidal Nino, lol.

I loved the part when he was talking about games. Probably because I play all of the games mentioned there >< (I'm quite an otaku...)

Be sure to write more fics ^^

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hkrym July 31 2009, 05:50:41 UTC
Ah~~ I was worried that no one gets that part, I'm an otaku myself and am very happy to know another one~~

I'll try to write more and thank you for reading!

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hkrym July 31 2009, 07:14:06 UTC
Thank you!

Glad that you understand the game part. I was like "Do people know about Tokimeki?" when I was writing.

Sorry if this question is just stupid but what's AU? I've been thinking but all that comes to my mind is alternate universe...

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hkrym August 3 2009, 21:15:26 UTC
So, it IS Alternate Universe! *smacks own face*

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