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hkath

Fic: Modern Conveniences

Jul 29, 2006 15:19

Title: Modern Conveniences
Characters: Jack/Sawyer, Hurley, Sun
Rating: first half: PG, second half: NC-17
Summary: Welcome to the not-so-distant future.
Disclaimer: I am not the queen of Lost. Nor do I own the Jetsons (none of whom figure anywhere in this fic - thank GOD.)

Notes: This is the jetsons!fic of doom, if anyone has heard me talking ( Read more... )

jack/sawyer, -all fic-, -lost fic-

Comments 37

isis2015 July 29 2006, 20:23:16 UTC

Oh I loved it. I love all the dialouge between all of then, especially Sawyer and Sun's relationship. I've always loved to see some sort of connection between the two of them. Plus the image of Jin in a fedora is pretty cool. I also love this version of the future, where there's all this stuff that's supposed to be good for you, no cigarettes, tofu, those god awful memory foam beds, and it just makes everything worse.

And the smut was awesome too. ;)

hkath July 30 2006, 17:22:01 UTC

Yay, thanks! Writing this actually sorta freaked me out :D

arabella_hope July 29 2006, 20:28:50 UTC

“I needed something slippery,” Jack says.

Oh, JESUS. I have to just say that now before I even finish. FUUUUCK.

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Done. and WHEW. That is some hot stuff there, lady. Damn. But even better? The sensuality of them lighting up, the way you described it was such...foreplay. And I adore the dynamic between them in the diner - Sun and Sawyer being the only ones...I wibbled. Yes I did. Also, Sawyer fiening for a cig...loved it.

You blow me away, you really do. This is fabulous and I am so SO excited that there will be more. ♥ Now I've gotta head outside to participate in some 'illegal' activities myself. *MUAH*

hkath July 30 2006, 17:23:13 UTC

OMG! I got mid-story feedback! :D

Glad you liked it!

Yeah, I think it's the dirtiest thing I ever wrote. You have that effect on me!! Bad, bad influence ;)

*loves*

assassinofjoy July 29 2006, 20:53:03 UTC

Oh, I love this! The snippets of the future are awesome (abundance of healthy food, tobacco being illegal, etc), and I loved the comradry (sp?) with Hurley and Sun. Plus the relationship between Jack/Sawyer? GUH. Excellent, sugar.

hkath July 30 2006, 18:48:13 UTC

Thanks, hon! Glad you like my dystopian future ;)

*luvs* ellel July 29 2006, 21:48:14 UTC

First of all-HOT! *lets steam out* Totally loved the Jack/Sawyer...the images of them sharing a cigarette and kissing is burned into my brain now,thank you!

Now,as for the future-scary,man.Smoking and tobacco is illegal?And no real meat?I mean,I love tofu and actually eat it every day,but no meat?I need a smoke,fast!;)

Re: *luvs* hkath July 30 2006, 19:59:19 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it, your belated majesty!

Yeah, this was sort of an excuse to write extensively about food and smoking :D Mmmmmm!

halfdutch July 29 2006, 23:29:12 UTC

Sooo nice. You always paint the scene so vividly, with such painstaking detail that we're there.

I love your sly sense of humor here, like the second use of "two-one." ;) I love that underlying sense of melancholy here and them being out of step with the modern world and craving everything that's now forbidden. And that scene in the truck -- GUH. So sensual -- the smoking, the sex, the sweat on the back of Jack's neck -- just all of it. It builds so beautifully and ends perfectly.

*loves*

hkath July 30 2006, 20:09:17 UTC

Aww, thanks! *smooches*

Your smoking!Jack icons is doing strange things to me :)