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Life For Rent: Easier Said Than Done - PG-13, KoyamaPi; RyoShige

Mar 04, 2009 09:54

title: Easier Said Than Done
author: nihongofrancais
genre: RPS, NEWS
pairing: Koyama/YamaPi, Ryo/Shige
word count: 9,531 words
summary: AU Future. Continuation of "Out of Sight, Out of Mind". There is only so much running away Koyama can do when everyone else is running after him.
author's notes: see here.

( Easier Said Than Done )

ginzarhapsody, pairing: nishikato, pairing: koyamapi, fandom: je!fic, special: life for rent, rating: pg-13

Comments 5

gingifere March 5 2009, 15:28:49 UTC

Ouch, ouch, ouchhhhhh. Guh, heart is very much

snow_meow March 6 2009, 02:55:56 UTC

I love Jin here. It is like I can feel Bakanishi's presence at his opening statement.

I am so glad and happy that Shige went to see Kei. I think Kei would have never made the move if Shige had not gone to see him. I guess Kei needed to know that he still has his best friend and like Shige said what he needs is in Tokyo.

ginzarhapsody March 7 2009, 13:40:35 UTC

*laughs* That first line of Jin's really is in-your-face. ;)

I sort of think so too. Koyama's is just too much of a chicken in ways to confront things head on sometimes, and having the support of his best friend helped.

lastingdreams8 December 10 2009, 01:05:45 UTC

Opening up with semi-domestic NishiKato is the best thing one could ask for :D
And opening up with the Sayaendou was so poetic and symbolic in so many ways, but I'm sure that's why you put it there ;)

The whole description of Ryo and Shige's relationship developing was perfect :D And I love how Ryo still remembered the concert formations from 5 years ago ^^

Great Pin banter, and my image of sweet, innocent, Yui is now completely out of the window XD

KoyaShige reuniting is nice. It's got just the right amount of awkwardness, frustration, and familiarity :D

The scene where Koyama just cracks and starts yelling at the fangirl made me cry. I know it's a reality that idols have to face and there are fans out there like the ones he assumes she is...but Koyama being so cynical about everything-that's harsh man. I can understand why, but damn!
You make all this plot development so seamless; love it!

ginzarhapsody August 9 2010, 19:32:20 UTC

And opening up with the Sayaendou was so poetic and symbolic in so many ways, but I'm sure that's why you put it there ;)

That performance being referenced is the one that was on the DVD with LE version of "Hoshi o Mezashite"; or at least, that was what I was referencing in my head when I wrote it. :)

Great Pin banter, and my image of sweet, innocent, Yui is now completely out of the window XD

Another image I was hoping to break with this fanfic. Dark Koyama, a not so innocent Yui. *laughs*

KoyaShige reuniting is nice. It's got just the right amount of awkwardness, frustration, and familiarity :DI'm glad you felt that way because those parts were hardest and yet easier to write at the same time. Writing it really was like two old friends coming together to find that their relationship is still the same; it flowed like that ( ... )