Comments | hizashikage: Life For Rent: Out of Sight, Out of Mind

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Life For Rent: Out of Sight, Out of Mind - PG-13, KoyamaPi

Mar 04, 2009 09:51

title: Out of Sight, Out of Mind
author: nihongofrancais
genre: RPS, NEWS
pairing: Koyama/YamaPi
rating: PG-13
word count: 8,583 words
summary: AU Future. When NEWS broke up in 2007, Koyama left the jimusho for a normal life, hoping to forget his failures. One can never really, truly forget though.
author's notes: see here.

( Out of Sight, Out of Mind )

ginzarhapsody, pairing: koyamapi, fandom: je!fic, special: life for rent, rating: pg-13

Comments 6

gingifere March 5 2009, 15:20:13 UTC

Ahhh, I am so happy you're sharing this with the world Peyton. And boy, I'd forgotten how utterly broken they both are :[ ksjjsdj to be honest though, I feel more for Koyama at this stage because he's settled, he's got a life, and ok, maybe he isn't happy, but it's his and suddenly Yamapi's back getting in the way and bringing up the past and asdjk they're both so screwed up :(

This isn't as long as it could be because I've told you a lot of my feelings and thoughts about it, but I am rushing off now to read the second and the third parts :)

snow_meow March 6 2009, 02:22:55 UTC

This is so sad.

I was like screaming "Give me back Koya-mama!!!! This cannot be Koyama" *cries*

I feel my heart breaking with each word I read.

ginzarhapsody March 7 2009, 13:38:44 UTC

Aw. I'm sorry! ;_; But Koyama gets better, slowly. :)

lastingdreams8 December 10 2009, 00:37:44 UTC

♥
You write the best AU's!
When filling out application forms, he no longer put his occupation as idol. No
For some reason, this really hit me hard. It just made me think about all those juniors who actually do quit after awhile and find other jobs. I mean, being an idol is a legit job, but what if you weren't all that successful? I think you've keyed in on something a lot of people feel, which is amazing :D ( ... )

ginzarhapsody August 9 2010, 19:25:31 UTC

because i'm so bad about replying to fic comments, here's me doing it after like MONTHS. but seriously, thank you for the comments in the first place. ♥

You write the best AU's!

You are too kind. :) I'm glad you liked this and that the darkness was really conveyed, especially with Koyama. That was the original point of this fic, to explore the idea of a dark, not necessarily positive Koyama, so I'm glad that it worked.

♥

lastingdreams8 October 12 2011, 03:57:16 UTC

I'm re-reading over this, and it's scary how some of these things could be true and could happen between members. I don't think I'm ready to read it all the way through again because of it.
Still, it's a brilliant story <3