Traces Left Behind - JE - R

[hizashikage]

Title: Traces Left Behind
Author: anamuan
Word Count: 2,129
Rating: R
Threesome: Koki/Kame/Jin
Summary: The night was a blur of strobing lights and rolling hips and the taste of tongue and vodka.
Warnings: None.
Notes: Thank you to all the people I whined at, both for putting up with me as well as for making this better. Written for marlenem for jthreesome.

Comments

[myxstorie]

This is just awesome, the whole dynamic between the three of them.. I love how Koki thinks of them all, especially how sweet he is with Kame (in his head, at least) and I'm disappointed it had to end, but I'm kind of glad you chose to end it where it did - leave them wanting more and all that jazz ^^ I was nearing the end thinking 'they're all angry, there's not much left, please don't try and squeeze some angry sex in there' (I guess 'threesome' automatically makes me think 'sex' XD)

♥

[anamuan]

Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you liked it, and that there were no angry!sex curveballs to throw you at the end. I think it would have ruined whatever they're hoping to make.

[gingifere]

Ahh, I remember this! Oh Koki/Kame/Jin. So horriby complicated and unhappy. I love that you gave them a sort of hope at the end though. I also love the Koki pov--I always find his view on things fascinating, especially when you consider just how angry he was with Jin for leaving and how completely bonkers he is for Kame.

Lovely Nikki ♥

[anamuan]

jlafejlkag i really hate ending on a totally horrible note. i remember thinking that there was no way i could possibly get them to be happy but it didn't feel over until there was some sort of resolution.