FIC: OPHELIAC - IV (PART B)

[hiyuura]

Title: Opheliac
Author: Chesiere Cat aka Hiyuura
Disclaimer: Katekyo Hitman Reborn! © Amano Akira
Pairing: Byakuran/Mukuro
Rating: NC-17
Warning: BDSM, BL, brainwash, blood, yaoi

Note: (1) This story is originally written in Thai, translated on friends' request. So please excuse me if the language isn't as flowing. ^^;;
(2) Because this is just

Comments

[z_officinale]

<3 Always loving your updates! And thanks for the doujin as well, the art is looovely <3. Your work is always much appreciated! <333

[hiyuura]

Awww...thank you! X3~

[speara]

Thank you for this fic ! xD
but set me wondering, who will be the one truly broken by the end of this fic xD
And please continue 169 fanfictions even though, one is dead and one is back in a testube >_>#

[hiyuura]

but set me wondering, who will be the one truly broken by the end of this fic xD

For that, we'll see...

I'm so continuing 169 fanfictions. I don't want this ship to disappear...

[itakoaya]

dere dere Mukkun just give yourself completely to thy loving God \o/ /SHOT

I am impatient to see them finally together Q3Q

... "I'll never have your child" /RUNS OFF.

[hiyuura]

Aww...don't worry. They'll get together...eventually. ;)

But, darling, you're such a perv. LOL.

[soulezz]

OMG!!! i'm so glad i found this fic, it absolutely amazing, i can't wait to find out what will happen next. i read all 5 parts in one going and i feel like i could still continue...i hope to see you update soon. =D

i was just wondering...is this story written in Mukuro's point of view or is it a three person narrating the story? some time i get a little confuse on who's point of view it is through and who is talking. one more thing...is the italic and bold words past thoughts and phrase?

[hiyuura]

Italic = thoughts
"Italic" = past thoughts/speech quoted
Bold = emphasis

The story is in 3rd person point of view. But sometimes it transits into a character's POV. It'll be easier to tell who it's if you focus on the thoughts in italic.

Anyway, thank you for your comment. It really makes my day. ^^