Ashtray Heart [13/13]

Jul 28, 2012 17:59

Title: Ashtray Heart [13/13]
Pairing: OnHo, 2Min
Rating: R
Word Count: 1778
Genre: angst, smut, slice of life
Summary: Minho cheated. And now he regrets it dearly.

Previous chapters: PROLOGUE, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12

“But, the world is not enough, is it, Minho?” )

✿type: gay, ♫other: fanfic, Ωgenre: angst, ✂fic: ashtray heart, ☃lenght: chaptered, ☂pairing: onho, ☂pairing: 2min, Ωgenre: smut, ✎rating: R, Ωgenre: slice of life, ✿type: ot3

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hitoshisakurai July 29 2012, 11:58:18 UTC
Indeed ^^

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princessliette July 28 2012, 17:10:03 UTC
”If you fell for two persons, choose the second one, because if you loved the first one enough, you wouldn’t have fallen for the latter.”

NU..I DONT AGREE :< if you love the latter most then you'll break up with the first. if you don't leave the first one, means you still need him :<<

OMG T___T

why i feel so sad that Minho didn't come to find Taemin T___T

i will just read the epilogue T___T

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hitoshisakurai July 29 2012, 12:01:41 UTC
Yeah, but... it's actually something my sister read somewhere and told me and I thought 'that would fit just right' and, idk... I think there is some truth in it actually... if you really fall for the second one too, not just, have a crush on that person. If it feels like real love, then, I think that this sentence is quite right. Though everyone's different, ne><

Because Taemin told him not to come, he wanted to start totally anew D: He didn't want him to make it any harder. So, yeah.

<3

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ext_1319544 July 28 2012, 19:19:58 UTC
Hi sorry didnt reply to those comments i am a very lazy person. And I don't hate you, I just hated the fact there was 2min (because I didnt like the fact 2min possible ending) and I stayed up til 6am reading you r book (i call it a book, some may call it a story. My logic is: chapters = Book
”If you fell for two persons, choose the second one, because if you loved the first one enough, you wouldn’t have fallen for the latter.”
Omggg this made me so emotional :') Its so cute and so true <3 ( ... )

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hitoshisakurai July 29 2012, 12:11:28 UTC
*high-five* I'm lazy too, don't worry xD ( ... )

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yaoi_kpop_gurl July 29 2012, 14:54:44 UTC
this is so perfect
”If you fell for two persons, choose the second one, because if you loved the first one enough, you wouldn’t have fallen for the latter.”

i agree with that quote so much, if he loved taemin so much he wouldn't have grown to love jinki

/secretly happy it ends in onho

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hitoshisakurai July 29 2012, 16:45:02 UTC
Good thing my sister read this quote to me once^^

Haha, you don't need to be 'secretly' happy, you know ;D

Thank you for reading!^^

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yaoi_kpop_gurl July 30 2012, 15:11:39 UTC
^^ well yeah I'm really happy LOL because I love onho a whole lot and your welcome it was such a good fic

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kasayu July 30 2012, 18:23:49 UTC
The whole life he’s built up on the vision of him and Taemin forever together, all the times they’ve been together, laughed together, cried together, dreamed together, it all turned into a distant nothingness with that simple sentence- ‘I’m moving out.’
“Why?” Minho tries, at the verge of tears. I'M AT THE VERGE OF TEARS TOO YOU HEAR ME BB TTATT

“I have no idea what he must have felt. At least I… I had you, I had you for real. At least for some time” he wipes his tears with his sleeve and chuckles breathlessly “while he… God, Minho, do you realize how shocked he was? How lost? I should have known, I should have known, but I was so blinded with my trust for you that I never even let such thought occur to me…” I¨m so sorry for quoting entire paragraphs but omg.... this is seriously so so so heartbreaking, I can't. I hate it so much but I love it so much.... i can't... and then when Taeminnie asks if he wasn't enough, poor baby.... that's just another side of the coin... Minho was unhappy but what about Taemin TT_________TT

”If you ( ... )

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hitoshisakurai July 30 2012, 19:58:38 UTC
Gosh, your comments amke me so happy you don't even know ;~~~~~; or actually you probably do know. I'm saying it just about all the time. OTL. But I mean it every time, so T^T <3

I can't hate Minho either, even my sis (who's now in chapter 6) admitted she started feel some sort of sympathy towards him (even though after the prologue she was all about hating on him and calling him names). Idk, it's not like I think that what he did is right, because it's certaintly not, but somehow all those characters have something from me in them, so, idk... I understand him. Idk. Otl.

OMG THIS JONGTAE GIF HOW PRECIOUS IS THAT ;~~~~~~~~~~;

And thank you so much TT_____TT And yes, I'll totally let you hug me, come on TT______TT *hugs tightly*


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