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hitoshisakurai

Ashtray Heart [12/13]

Jul 26, 2012 23:47

Title: Ashtray Heart [12/13]
Pairing: OnHo, 2Min
Rating: R
Word Count: 1575
Genre: angst, smut, slice of life
Summary: Minho cheated. And now he regrets it dearly.

Previous chapters: PROLOGUE, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11

( And, before Minho can help it, he bursts into laughter. It’s been a while since he last laughed so wholeheartedly, so merrily, without forcing it. He continues laughing when he hears the dialogue shouted between his best friend and the bartender. )

✿type: gay, Ωgenre: angst, ✂fic: ashtray heart, ☂pairing: onho, ☂pairing: 2min, Ωgenre: smut, ✎rating: R, Ωgenre: slice of life, ✿type: ot3

Comments 23

such_a_sadsound July 27 2012, 12:05:26 UTC

Fuck fuck fuckity fuck fuuuck. I'm just a sobbing mess right now. ;A; I just can't deal with this at all. It's 4:30 in the morning and I read all the chapters in one sitting. Let me just say each chapter is flawlessly heartbreaking,and beautiful.Thank you so much for writing this, and I wish I could leave a better comment showering you with love and all but I can't right now. I'm just a puddle that can't handle anything rn. ;A;

hitoshisakurai July 27 2012, 12:19:49 UTC

No way. REALLY?! Oh my, thank you SO MUCH, you've no idea how happy it made me ;~~~~; gosh, you read them all in one go and in the morning on top of that?! Girl, just... oh my. Now you made me want to sob.
Thank you so much for reading!!T^T

such_a_sadsound July 27 2012, 20:22:43 UTC

Don't sob, then it's going to make me sob even more. T.T Can I just tell you how much I love this story!?.s;lsihosi;fndflasiuf. It's sooo amazing, I swear. Ughhh I'm still a puddle though. ;A;

hitoshisakurai July 27 2012, 21:10:35 UTC

HOW CAN I NOT SOB WHEN YOU SAY SUCH THINGS, OMG ;~~~~; THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!! <3
Damn, now, after seeing the new Batman, I'm all ready to write, I'm so excited I think I won't get much sleep this night, lol

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sentokki July 27 2012, 15:12:18 UTC

KIBUM KNOWS TAEMIN. DON'T TELL ME IT'S THE SAME KIBUM. Hehehe thank you for deciding to update by tmr, i love you so much for this :'>

hitoshisakurai July 27 2012, 21:06:09 UTC

Yes, it's the very same Kibum, even though there's many Kibums in Korea, lol xDD
I love you for reading, you know :DD Thank you so much <3

sashitae July 27 2012, 18:56:55 UTC

OMGGG the scariest moment is hereee....
I wonder how's Taeminnnie doing right now... He must be really broken...
Listen to Jinki, Minho...! Go see Taemin!!! (LOL, i'm still rooting for 2MIN jsyk :P)
But well... i'll prepare myself for any possibilities...
Thanks for updating, i can't wait to finally know the ending... (tho i'm scared as hell XDDD)
So, see you in the next chapter!

hitoshisakurai July 27 2012, 21:07:59 UTC

I'm scared as hell to know the readers' opinions onthe last chapter and epilogue... like, really, I mustn't screw it up... x"D
I just came back from the cinema, and I'm so ecstatic *BATMAAAAAAAAAN FTW <333*, so I guess I'm gonna write now xDD
Thank you for reading!!<3

sashitae July 27 2012, 22:07:08 UTC

Awww... don't even worry about it, it's your own story so you don't have to be afraid of messing up the ending or anything, you can do as you like as long as it makes you happy, hehe...

And how fuunnn... i haven't watched Batman yet XD But Yaaayy... for another update, i'll be waiting...
Thanks~

ext_1319544 July 28 2012, 12:59:31 UTC

" he's broken three hearts and needs some help "
OMGGGG almost dies :D I had to stop and think really. Taemin's , Jinki's and his own.

Gosh I hate you so much.
GRRR, I'm so sorry for all this hate I'm just abit... you know... on ends :)
I've got a love/hate relationship with you.
But I love you and you have amazing Talent :D

hitoshisakurai July 28 2012, 13:45:13 UTC

Omg, I love it how you immediately switch from hate to love towards me xD
Thank you so much for all your comments, they totally made my day <3 The ending will be here soon ^.^

kasayu July 30 2012, 17:27:28 UTC

Whoa so late TT___________TT

The JongKey is so cute omg asghjkl all my feels TT____________TT I love how you've inserted all their little exchanges and merged them together with Minho's feelings... it was so bitter-sweet.

""...he suddenly realizes that his and Jinki’s relationship was filled with nothing but a bunch of lies, cruel lies from Minho’s side, the only sincerity coming from Jinki." This. This is so heartbreaking, really. As i said already (at least I think i did), I would never ever want to be in Jinki's position... it's really scary how easy it is to get into the trap of lies without even knowing how... or how easy it is to create the trap yourself and then not knowing what to do with it /shudders.

"Another person, extremely important to him in some twisted way, in a different way than Taemin ever has and ever will." This made me kinda sad... though I think i understand why is that.... Jinki has been just so... life-changing. Nothing will ever be the same for Minho after him. I feel sorry for Taemin but as I felt it ( ... )

hitoshisakurai July 30 2012, 19:51:22 UTC

Omo, you always know when to appear <33

I just needed some JongKey fluff, you know T^T even now I posted a quick oneshot which is all about angst, just what's wrong with me otl

And I totally can't wait for your JongYu, hwaiting with your studies and stories, bb!!!<33