Ashtray Heart [4/13]

Jun 12, 2012 20:44

Title: Ashtray Heart [4/13]
Pairing: OnHo, 2Min
Rating: R
Word Count: 1564
Genre: angst, smut, slice of life
Summary: Minho cheated. And now he regrets it dearly.

Previous chapters: PROLOGUE, 1, 2, 3

Loyal, undeniable and flawless relationship, as Jonghyun likes to describe them. )

✿type: gay, ♫other: fanfic, Ωgenre: angst, ✂fic: ashtray heart, ☃lenght: chaptered, ☂pairing: onho, ☂pairing: 2min, Ωgenre: smut, ✎rating: R, Ωgenre: slice of life, ✿type: ot3

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princessliette June 12 2012, 20:54:45 UTC
spot

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princessliette June 16 2012, 19:53:18 UTC
*o* geez *o* after taemin leave..Minho will come to onew again? *o* ung *o*

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hitoshisakurai June 16 2012, 22:00:18 UTC
Only I know that ^o^

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keziayansen June 13 2012, 02:25:15 UTC
Geez =="
U always make speechless T_______T *u're such a daebak writer :)*
What I can say now??? I really want OnHo, keekeke (sorry for being a hardcore OnHo) but I don't want Taemin gets hurt TT^TT
I think I'm gonna wait whatever the next chappy u'll put, hehehe.......
thanks for the update ^^
Fighting <3

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hitoshisakurai June 16 2012, 10:48:34 UTC
Ahahahaha, thank you!! ^.^
Hurting any of them hurts me too, I'm kind of a masochist, ngl x"D
I'll try to not be that late with update as last time, thank you for reading!!

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fullmoonsyn June 13 2012, 06:23:21 UTC
I admit I root for the onho T.T Taemin you're young and beautiful, you'll bounce back in no time! xD can't wait for the next update :D

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hitoshisakurai June 16 2012, 10:49:19 UTC
Ahahahahahaha, omg "Taemin you're young and beautiful, you'll bounce back in no time" that made my day xD
Thank you for reading~~!!

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kasayu June 13 2012, 07:54:39 UTC
Waah omg, lol, I'm so conflicted! I feel sorry for Minho cuz the feeling of guilt must be terrible... and I feel sorry for Jinki! sobs 'accidental one-night-stand' sounds just so wrong (idk why but the fact that it's 'accidental' seems even more hurtful to me than the fact that it's a 'one-night-stand') TAT And I suspect I'll feel sorry for Tae too, eventually... Minho, boy, what have you done TT___TT

Sweetheart, I have to point out that I loved the love scene here. It was so beautifully written... so, idk, sensual? Like, it wasn't too descriptive, far from that actually, but it was so lonving and somehow melancholic and full of longing.... Beautiful, really :3

Can't wait to see where this will bring Minho, poor boy lol. This is actually such an amazing simple plot that gives enough space for twists and is so interesting it could totally become a movie rn :'3 (Yep, I've been watching tv too much lately and the amount of bulshit hurts my eyes and I think many ppl on lj could write better movies than ppl in Hollywood blah x"DBtw. do ( ... )

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hitoshisakurai June 17 2012, 15:15:45 UTC
*IS STILL TO SHAKEN UP AFTER YOUR FIC OMG*

Ne, I'm so happy you liked the love scene bb!! It was supposed to be way longer and stuff but I was feeling really crappy and wanted to just get it done quickly so idk /sobs but thank you so much!! ;~~~;

And about your observation and thought of OnTae meeting- I can't tell you anything 'cause I have the whole thing outlined already, you'll just see bb~~!!!;3

Gosh sorry for a crappy reply, your comment wasn't crappy by any means, MY LAST 3 COMMENTS ON YOUR FIC ARE CRAPPY and sorry but I still can't think properly and now I really gotta go so 'kay bye I love you long time omg sobs /dead

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sweatnitemare June 13 2012, 17:22:38 UTC
I was abt to bt I have to stop my train of thoughts when you said don't jump into conclusion. Aish! It must be hard to be minho.

The guilt is one thing, taemin's trust is another but his constant coincidence meet up with onew is a whole different story.

Minho, bro! You're screwed. XD

I think, I'm gonna stop thinking abt what's gonna happen for this story. I'm just gonna ride ur flow and see hw it ends n accept it. 2min was my 1st ship anyway.

Thank u for the update!

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hitoshisakurai June 16 2012, 10:53:11 UTC
Lol, sorry ^.^ And, yeah, it is... I'm such a mean writer, otl xD

You mean as your first otp or your first ship in this fic?

Thank you for reading! ;))

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