Ashtray Heart [2/?]
Title: Ashtray Heart [2/?]
Pairing: OnHo, 2Min
Rating: R
Word Count: 1355
Genre: angst, smut, slice of life
Summary: Minho cheated. And now he regrets it dearly.
Previous chapters: PROLOGUE, 1
( There was something in his eyes, just barely hooded, something so captivating and yet heartbreaking that it made him unable to look back. )
Pairing: OnHo, 2Min
Rating: R
Word Count: 1355
Genre: angst, smut, slice of life
Summary: Minho cheated. And now he regrets it dearly.
Previous chapters: PROLOGUE, 1
( There was something in his eyes, just barely hooded, something so captivating and yet heartbreaking that it made him unable to look back. )
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Hahahahaha, now I know why you knew it, you should've seen my face when I read about your Jinki in a library, really xDD
Jjong will appear again, just wait ;3 and I kinda noticed from that short part in your 4th chappie where Jinki asks whether Key slept with Jjong or not X"D
GOSH I'M SO HAPPY YOU LIKED THOSE DESCRIPTIONS ;~~~~~~~~; I'm always so insecure about my descriptions actually, I don't like describing people's looks in Polish, so, you know, in English it's like a real pain in ass xDD Especially when I'm aware of my flaws><
Yupp, Jinki just broke up with his girlfriend... or rather, she broke up with him... but that'll come soon ;3
Hope you'll like the rest, thank you so much for readiing!! ;W;
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I know, DIVA KEY is the best<3.
OMG!! I know. I thought the same thing, lol XD. Everybody loves library-Jinki, :3.
YEY!! Maybe me loving his character will lessen the guilt I feel over making him mean all the time, XD.
Seriously! You have nothing to be insecure about. I think you described him perfectly, just enough to know who he was and link the connection, but honestly my heart kinda went doki~doki when I read it, haha. Is English not your first language then? Because your writing skill is amazing, you really do not need to worry (^_^).
OMG, I can't wait to read more... I feel this is gonna be awesome (and heartbreaking).
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You know, I kind of feel like I'm putting a bit of myself into each character in here @_@
Hahaha, Jjong just appeared in the newest chappie, jsyk xDD
English is definitely not my first language, I'm Polish x"D But, omg, I'm so happy you think that, you don't even know ;~~~~~; /forever insecure
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