Comments | hitoshisakurai: In Delirium [1/1]

hitoshisakurai

In Delirium [1/1]

May 18, 2012 19:27

Title: In Delirium [1/1]
Word count: 3388
Pairing: slight!MinKey, broken!JongKey
Rating: PG-13
Genre: slice of life, angst
Summary: Kibum can't seem to forget.

( Kibum’s smile grows fonder immediately. Minho has always had this effect on him. )

☂pairing: jongkey, ☃lenght: oneshot, ✿type: gay, ☂pairing: minkey, ♫other: fanfic, Ωgenre: angst, Ωgenre: slice of life, ✎rating: PG-13

Comments 11

kasayu May 18 2012, 17:45:32 UTC

Stealing myself a spot for later, okay? ;~;

hitoshisakurai May 18 2012, 19:50:47 UTC

( ... )

princessliette May 18 2012, 22:00:46 UTC

*hugs*

hitoshisakurai May 19 2012, 06:56:10 UTC

*cuddles*

princessliette May 19 2012, 08:33:43 UTC

*kisses*

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hitoshisakurai May 19 2012, 06:56:45 UTC

Lol, it's a very literal slice-of-life-angst, just so you know x"D
Thank you bb!!<33

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hitoshisakurai May 21 2012, 20:11:11 UTC

You hate me?? The feelings is mutual >DDD Lololol, you know what I mean xDD <333

poor me, I know, I thought I'd kill 'Jonghyun' and 'Jinki' and I was really depressed for some several days

Awww, thank you so much bb!!! real stories are always the easiest to write

I'll consider that >D

Ikr?? That's why once I'm done with finals I'm gonna write 24/7... really... Friday, wae you not here yet...

kalliope382 May 22 2012, 06:11:42 UTC

Oh my god, this was beautiful, and sad, so fucking sad... Actually crying right now... fuck... I wanna smack Jjong and tell him he's wrong, that Key is perfect for him but aaagh, this was so GOOOOOOOD~ Really glad I decided to give it a read even though I normally only read smut /oops perving

"“Jonghyun’s here” are the words spoken right into his ear. Kibum stops breathing for a moment, letting his eyes fall shut. He counts to five and only then turns his head to Minho. He’s so close, so impossibly close, and his lips tingle at the proximity, it’d be so easy to crane his neck and let his lips press against Minho’s-
“Where?” comes out a weak shriek, as Kibum realizes his inner peace has gone to hell."

Oh, this part gave me chills. You are so good.

hitoshisakurai May 22 2012, 06:45:45 UTC

Wow, I didnt't think someone else would read it, what a surprise~~!
Really? You liked it that much?? Gosh, thank you!
Haha, I was like that too about two years ago, I'd only read fics rated NC-17 or R x"D
I can tell you that this Jjong is really messing with Kibum's inner peace these days. And that ain't funny.
Really, I'm so happy you liked it *AND YOU QUOTED!!!*, you made my day, thank you sooooo much!!

1412_bunny June 1 2012, 05:27:56 UTC

*cries* I hate broken!jongkey.... ;-;

good fic though~ ^^

hitoshisakurai June 1 2012, 08:15:45 UTC

I hate it too ><
Thank you for reading!!^^