Each Beat Reminds Me Of You [14C / 16]

Jul 02, 2011 01:32


Title: Each Beat Reminds Me Of You [14C / 16]
Pairing: JongKey
Word Count: 1860
Rating: NC-17
Genre: drama, slice of life, angst, smut
Summary: What happens when you fall deeply with someone you shouldn’t have known? What happens if you live your life peacefully only to realize there’s something missing in it so you put all on the line just to feel ( Read more... )

☂pairing: jongkey, Ωgenre: drama, ✿type: gay, ♫other: fanfic, Ωgenre: angst, ☃lenght: chaptered, ✂fic: each beat, Ωgenre: smut, Ωgenre: slice of life, ✎rating: NC-17

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hitoshisakurai July 1 2011, 23:33:49 UTC
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kasayu July 2 2011, 09:41:06 UTC
Aaaaah omg the ending is so unsettling!! D: I'm so so so worried for Kibummie /sob It's nice that Jjong's trying to get back to his old self and I'm happy for it, but uugh can't he help the boy he loves?!! ><

Buuuuuut anyway! I love it!!! ♥ The fact that it's been divided like this is totally okay with me. I love these longer chaps (and I'm mad at myself that with my current story I'm unable to make them longer = =). Oh my, I feel actually a little sad that it's coming to an end but then again, this is such a great story dear, I feel like if I'd read it again, I'd relaize so many new things...like with good books or movies which you always return to ^___^
I'm so glad Jjong somehow seems to overcame his obsession. (I only hope he'll be able to save Kibummie, too TT3TT). The whole scene with Jinki was so sweet ;~~~; I think Jinki is the kind of best friend we all wish to have... and this sentence "Maybe… maybe I just needed someone only mine. Someone I could call my own." seriously brought tears in my eyes. He must've been so lonely ( ... )

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hitoshisakurai July 2 2011, 09:55:16 UTC
I had no idea for the ending for this chapter and that's why it sucks D:

Tbh... I didn't plan Jonghyun getting over those obsessive feelings. Actually... it just... happened o.O
And Jinki... yeah~ I wish I had my own Jinki as well ;______; *ok, I won't complain, my friends are amazing :D But as I look at him I just wish he could be my friend too... and I always imagine him like this, like such heart-warming, kind, caring person ♥*

THANK YOU, BB!!♥♥♥ Omg, read it again? Gosh TT.TT
And I'm happy you think like this!! :D tbh I'm pretty nervous about finishing this story because I don't want to disappoint anybody and yet I feel like it's gonna happen anyways .______.

It's so hard to find someone like that and when you finally find him you should treasure him (and never let go)....
THIS. ;_______________________;

Oh man my vision gets blurry, now I feel this lack of sleep #____# I have problems with creating porper sentences. Omona.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING & COMMENTING, BB!! You always make my day, you know?♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥


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kasayu July 2 2011, 10:16:53 UTC
Haha it's just that with that kind of scene, which I assumed happened to Key, it will be too hard to wait for new chaper /greedy & impatient reader desu? x"DD But n'aww it's totally okay, go out and have fun in real life! We all will wait ^^v ( ... )

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hitoshisakurai July 1 2011, 23:34:03 UTC
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hongjinri


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hitoshisakurai July 1 2011, 23:34:17 UTC
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saikia2


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hitoshisakurai July 1 2011, 23:34:29 UTC
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jinkibum July 2 2011, 02:36:43 UTC
dear...hai..><
its so good that after all of those things happened to jonghyun a bestfriend, Jinki would be there to be the one by his side...

its so hard to forget your first love...
well i hope bummie will be found soon...

rest well honey...we will wait patiently for the next...


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hitoshisakurai July 2 2011, 06:53:58 UTC
Gosh, dear, I totally miss you here!!! TT___________TT
I replied your comment in your lj, have you seen it?
And I'm gonna reply your another one now.

Oh, yeah, it's so good he still has Jinki ;___________; I almost forgot about his existence xD


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jolieq July 2 2011, 03:33:24 UTC
how... how can this be possible FML FML ,kvhekhpñt4hpup

seems like I would never be the first one UGH!!!!

brb... gonna read part b and then this and comment both...

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jolieq July 2 2011, 05:31:50 UTC
"-I’ll be right there, Jonghyun, wait for me, ‘kay?"

I started to cry.. for real ;_; because Onew was there for him, he didn't even matter the time they had without talking, he was his friend still and that's just so beautiful, that kind of things make me tear up.. I cry for little things like this but not because of the big ones lol :P i'm sucj a weirdo >.<

Baby why are you so disappointed with your fic?! I LOVE IT! though i understand you , the last chapter of my fic I updated, I didn't like it :/

anyways i'm curious! how are they going to love each other now?! how is key going to know that Jonghyun is indeed jjong?!

sorry for the grammar errors in this comment, i'm sleepy, and when I get sleepy my english fails a lot

<3<3 is going to be a sad time now that your going to be on hiatus :(

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hitoshisakurai July 2 2011, 07:06:25 UTC
:D

You know... we can do it like that, the next time I'm gonna update I'll do it when you'll be online and I'll give you a sign, 'k? XDD

Awwww is it the first time I made you cry?? it seems so Gosh, now I feel my eyes watering as well ;_______; YOU'RE NOT A WEIRDO!! I'm so glad this part touched you ;_______;


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