Fic Post

[midnightdiddle]

Title: His Manifesto
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairing: Gokudera
Warnings: Uh. Character death.
Summary: And this is his manifesto, and always has been. Hate them more than they hate you, and you'll make it out alright. Future fic~

Comments

[rodya]

Ohmanohmanohmanohmanohmaaaaan.

You have this... indescribable amazing talent for working with feelings and taking words and using them (words, words, just letters put together and sounds and it's amazing how you do this) to convey such feelings in a way that the reader can feel it. And the reader can see and nearly touch the same way the characters do. Your imagery aides to the process. It's delightful and brilliant and I'm running out of coherent thoughts because it's just so good.

Keep writing.
Keep writing, because you have a fantastic talent for it.

Woah there. 8D;; Sorry for the incoherency of that jumble of text.
Nice work, niceniceniceniceamazing work. These are getting put in my memories. <3<3

[midnightdiddle]

Oh, man. I don't even know what to say. I really don't know what to say-- This has made me so happy and incoherent, and all I can seem to say is "oh man," and "thank you," and "omg." Oh, man. Thankyou. I just-- Wow. omg. Thank you~ *flails*

[demanawaits]

You've got this knack for incorporating each character's quirks in to the words they say, the actions they perform, rather than in the descriptions. It makes them feel more alive. It makes them more real. It's in every character. I especially enjoyed your Fuuta, from his ranking spells to the fact that he doesn't have parents (which is often... rather overlooked). Puppy-love-crush-grown-old-and-unrequited is definitely a soft spot to me; it pulls at my heartstrings like no other. I also liked your Hibari, from his intense jingoism to the fact that he knows he's the Mist Guardian, knows he's prone to leaving, and yet he still loves. When Hibari is written with a heart, despite his chilling tendencies, I can't help but fall in love with his character.

I'm awfully humbled by this; I don't seem to be able to mold the characters with anything other than idle description. Your writing is really impressive. Thanks so much for writing this!

(OTL now I have to go back to reading The Jungle... askgjsljs ugly book, ahaha)

[midnightdiddle]

Oh, goodness. :D This just-- oh, wow. It really made me happy, and feel a lot better, because I think characterization is where anyone who's writing feels a bit lost, and out of their depth, because you have to make them human, but recognizeable, and. I'm so glad you liked them, and. Thank you~ *so happy*

[x_saturnine]

I. I was holding up pretty well, you know, until--

"You'll miss me?" he asks, feeling like a child
And now I am gone gone gone.

Kiki. ;_;/

[midnightdiddle]

Zerlina. ;_;/

[theburningempty]

WAY TO BREAK MY HEART IN THE MOST AWESOME WAY POSSIBLE.

Plucking Feathers is my favourite. Just beautifulbeautifulbeautiful.

[midnightdiddle]

Hee~ Thank you! And I'm glad you liked Plucking Feathers. It was definitely a guilty pleasure, that one, 'cause playing with words and names and fairy tales, and. Thank you!

[teapoit]

Honestly, the more amazing the writing, the less coherent I tend to be, and these are - these are just...

Suffice to say that the emotion is terrifying. You have this gift for expression and story-telling that's incredible. I loved them all.

AND YOU MADE ME LIKE FUUTA/BIANCHI. Enough said. <33

[midnightdiddle]

<3 Goodness, thank you. I'm glad you liked them, and, wow. Thank you~ And I'm glad you like Fuuta/Biachi. XD <3<3<3