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Fic: Kaoru/Yamamoto - Overcoming Nervousness

May 16, 2010 09:53

Title: Overcoming Nervousness
Rating: PG-13 (make-outs)
Pairing: Kaoru/Yamamoto
Notes: Spoilers for chapter 289, fluff. Possibly horrifying mental images?

( Mizuno Kaoru threw like a pro. )

fanfic, character: yamamoto takeshi, character: mizuno kaoru

Comments 18

ivixie May 16 2010, 13:04:30 UTC

I've been waiting for someone to write this pair ever since I read the latest chapter...so...so...so...thank you very VERY much!! It was awesuuum, so good and sweet, and funny (vegetables…really Yamamoto, really man) and really nicely written ^__^ So...Thank you!

demoerin May 16 2010, 19:19:48 UTC

Thank you for the lovely comment. I couldn't resist writing this after the cuteness of last chapter.

yamamotokun80 May 16 2010, 13:23:25 UTC

cute...
and I wanted to hear other vegetable jokes...

demoerin May 16 2010, 19:21:53 UTC

I tried to think of vegetable jokes, but I couldn't come up with good ones and honestly, the images were so weird. XD

chinpirako May 16 2010, 14:24:42 UTC

Wow, that was really good! Very well written, and very in-character!

demoerin May 16 2010, 19:22:45 UTC

Thank you, those are very good things to hear. ♥

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demoerin May 16 2010, 19:23:41 UTC

*BASKS IN IT* :D

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demoerin May 18 2010, 04:16:26 UTC

If Veser inspires this reaction, I HAVE TO GIVE SOME LOVE BACK TO YOU. *friends*

Although I must admit I'm more about Veser/Lee (I like my ships really awkward, inappropriate, and miserable?), but I find it amusing that Veser's designated boyfriend is always twice his age. And now that Ples is actually in the comic, it's probably a matter of time before I ship them. The fanart's been putting forward a convincing case already.

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la_vie_noire May 16 2010, 16:59:46 UTC

Oh, that was amazing, you did so well with both of them, considering one is a character who barely have had lines. And Yamamoto was perfect.

Also, I don't see how this could give anyway horrifying mental images.

demoerin May 16 2010, 19:27:30 UTC

Thank you so much! I like to think if a character doesn't have much canon yet, then at least there's slightly less chance of screwing them up. And the possible mental images come from if you start thinking What exactly did you intend to do with that corn costume in this situation, Yamamoto?! That might fall more under 'weird' than horrifying, I guess. Or 'very weird'. But luckily, that's not Kaoru's kink.

la_vie_noire May 16 2010, 21:36:39 UTC

Pfft, I see, well, yeas, seriously, I was thinking Yamamoto spend a little too much time watching that infamous Yaoi anime I can't remember the name of right now (the corn one).

But anyway, again, thank you for writing this, you really did a great with the characters!