Fic: Runaway (1/1)

Aug 22, 2010 23:07

Title: Runaway
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Dean/Sam
Word Count: 5,409
Summary: They’re driving, always driving; and the roads, Sam’s learned, only ever end at the sea. (( When he left for Stanford, Sam stole his brother’s copy of ...And Justice for All; shoved it down in his duffel beneath his worn Levi’s and his res life paperwork. He doesn’t even like ( Read more... )

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hitlikehammers August 28 2010, 04:25:47 UTC
Goodness -- thank you so very, very much; I'm particularly glad that the format worked for you, and that you enjoyed it even if is was a little... different ;)

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hitlikehammers August 29 2010, 15:50:31 UTC
Considering how reluctant I was to post this in the first place, I cannot tell you how giddy it makes me that you so enjoyed it <3 Again, thank you.

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blcwriter August 23 2010, 05:15:48 UTC
The turn of this at the end (from Sam to Dean and Sam doesn't know but he should) and just slays me. All of it does.

I love it. And you.

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hitlikehammers August 28 2010, 04:26:07 UTC
You are basically the bestest ever. Forever and always. The end <3

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hitlikehammers August 28 2010, 04:26:39 UTC
Thank you so much; I'm so pleased you enjoyed this.

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danikos_realms August 23 2010, 08:54:55 UTC
Whow. It's mind-blowing with meaning, a bit bittersweet around the edges, and very fitting for them both.

It was beautiful in many ways, and there were many sentences that took my breath away, but this one touched me the most (...)green wasn’t like the grass or the trees or even like his favorite stuffed lizard with the purple polkadots on its back; no -- green was like his brother's eyes. So... oddly right; it's as if Dean defines Sam's world.

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hitlikehammers August 28 2010, 04:27:33 UTC
Thank you very much; I'm thrilled that you so enjoyed this.

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gottalovev August 23 2010, 14:54:48 UTC
I love this so very much. you know how to build atmosphere so very well and the tone of this, in all of it's beauty, is incredible.

the kissing scene was phenomenal. I love that it stays at that, though it makes it a bit bittersweet especially when Dean walks away at the end (though he's always there, none the less)

so many great lines but this one is a favorite:

If he looks hard enough, he can make out the moon; if he breathes deep enough, he can almost find the stars.

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hitlikehammers August 28 2010, 04:28:36 UTC
You're an absolute love, doll; thank you so very much <3

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