Fic: Fall Apart Again (1/1)

[hitlikehammers]

Title: Fall Apart Again
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Claire/Jack
Word Count: 200
Summary: She doesn’t know why he puts up with her. For missy_useless, who requested “Claire/Jack” at my Winter Gift-Fic Extravaganza. Spoilers through 5.16 - The Incident, Parts 1 & 2; Speculative Spoilers for Season 6.
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot. Title belongs to Brandi

Comments

[missy_useless]

First off, Laughing With will always be one of my favorite fics of all time (never getting over it!), so yay for coinciding plots. :)

Anyway, this fic is just as beautiful as everything written by you is. Your Claire voice is stunning, and the entire piece is both heartbreaking and beautiful. I'm afraid I love this pairing far too much for my own good. Again: Thank you, you are incredible. Thank you, thank you, thank you, a thousand times over. *hugs*

[hitlikehammers]

You are such a doll, my dear - I cannot tell you how thrilled I still am about your gorgeous feedback on 'Laughing With!'

And I'm so pleased you enjoyed this little bit, here; I really feel like this pairing works partly because it fits so well with the show's overtone of things be 'off,' if that makes sense, and I really love them together, so writing this for you was an absolute treat. Thank you, so very much *hugs*

[siluria]

Ooooooooh - you may have killed me with that last line!! I'm not an incest-y type person, but you made me believe!

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you! Normally I don't go the incest-y route, myself (well, at least, not in het... *is probably a terrible person*), but for some reason, the foundation of things on 'Lost' being just slightly... not right seems to fit this pairing to a T in my head.

[angela_weber]

This is gorgeous and captures Claire as she was in Season 1 so beautifully. And the last line hurts and just crystallizes how wrong their relationship really is perfectly. Amazing!

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you so much! I've really gotten to enjoy writing Claire through delving into the darkness, the innocence, the wrongness of a potential relationship between her and Jack, so I'm thrilled that you think this captured her S1 persona well.

[crickets]

Wow this is lovely. I love that last line. The whole thing is really beautiful.

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you! After writing them once, and giving them this story in my head, I found myself itching to flesh it out a little - hence, this result. I'm so glad you liked it :)