Fic: Checkmate (1/1)

Dec 21, 2009 21:18

Title: Checkmate
Rating: R
Pairing: McCoy/Chekov
Word Count: 702
Summary: They await collision; they are ready to collide. For haldoor, who requested “McCoy/Chekov” at my Winter Gift-Fic Extravaganza. Spoilers for Star Trek XI (2009).
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot.
Author’s Notes: For haldoor: Another one of those pairings where even when I'd looked at ( Read more... )

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haldoor December 25 2009, 21:05:10 UTC
And you gave me this one too... thank you once again! I love your descriptions; they're so powerful. The comparisons to their backgrounds and the pieces they play is incredible, and the last part - the last two paragraphs - round it out wonderfully! Also, particularly enjoyed this part:

Leonard sips bourbon as Chekov - his adversary, his opposition - his tempter; goddamn devil incarnate, an angel in disguise - laps little by little at the vodka in his glass, licks at lips full of fever, full of promise, and Leonard wonders whether those glistening drops of liquor could survive on a mouth so sweet, would last long enough to taste if his tongue ran across the smooth pillow of it, dove further and dragged, teased against smooth teeth.

Mmmm, lovely! Thanks again! *hugs*

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hitlikehammers December 29 2009, 00:57:01 UTC
Thank you, dear; I'm so glad this was to your liking - I was pretty apprehensive about trying this pairing!

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rubynye December 27 2009, 23:55:59 UTC
Chess is already sexy, but you've made it so hot my screen is melting around the edges. Wow.

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hitlikehammers December 29 2009, 01:08:47 UTC
Thank you so much, doll; I wasn't sure I'd managed these two very well, but if you think it was hot, I'll take your word for it :D

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strickens_girl December 28 2009, 05:39:07 UTC
I love this. The way they play, evenly matched, combined with their relationship - so awesome. Great job.

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hitlikehammers January 2 2010, 02:59:10 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad the chess metaphor worked for you :)

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siluria January 1 2010, 13:52:36 UTC
You've woven chess and relationships so seamlessly!! I adore how you equate the chess pieces and the styles of play to both men, how it's a stalemate just waiting for that one move to hit checkmate - gorgeous!!

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hitlikehammers January 2 2010, 03:00:27 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you thought the comparisons rang true - I really, really had no idea what I was doing with this pairing, but I'm glad you enjoyed whatever it was I did!

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