Fic: Hallowed Be Thy Name (1/1)

Nov 12, 2009 21:35

Title: Hallowed Be Thy Name
Rating: R
Pairing: Erica/Jack
Word Count: 553
Summary: Her skin is soft against his hands, hands so much more accustomed to other things - things like wafers and wine that were no where near as gentle, as intoxicating. For the cliche_bingo Prompt - Darkfic. General Spoilers for V (2009) through 1.02 - There Is No Normal Anymore.
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Comments 27

op_de_radio November 14 2009, 09:19:37 UTC
I feel so naughty for reading this, but I can't not read it! I really want them together, although it goes against my religion. AH FUCK. The old priest needs to be a V and needs to remove Jack from the priesthood so that Jack and Erica can happen.

Lovely, lovely job with this. I loved it. :D

GOD I FEEL NAUGHTY. :o

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hitlikehammers November 15 2009, 12:49:53 UTC
Oh, don't feel naughty - the way I see it, being informed about or practicing within a tradition just makes a person knowledgeable enough to write about it ;) Either way, though, I'm so pleased you enjoyed this (and you so know we'll get Jack out of his priestly garb soon enough so he can hook up with Erica; if 'V' stays on for any length of time, I am convinced this will happen)

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ozmissage November 14 2009, 18:33:14 UTC
Your writing is so sensuous. This is absolutely beautiful and just the thing to satisfy my priest-corrupting kink. Awesome job.

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hitlikehammers November 15 2009, 12:50:26 UTC
Goodness, thank you so much. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it :D

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angela_weber November 16 2009, 00:19:52 UTC
Your writing really is incredibly sensual and atmospheric, as others have said. Every sensation is so tangible! So, so beautiful. I love the idea of this pairing and you really do it justice--although we're only two episodes into the show, you completely sold me on his voice. Gorgeously done!

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hitlikehammers November 16 2009, 11:46:06 UTC
Wow - thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this, and that Jack's voice rang true for you :)

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xfirefly9x November 16 2009, 18:03:37 UTC
Amazing stuff! I love your descriptions. ♥

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hitlikehammers November 17 2009, 00:47:41 UTC
Thank you!

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aurilly November 18 2009, 18:38:42 UTC
Oh thank goodness. This pairing has been eating my brain. You write so beautifully! And the ending is wonderful with the contrast.

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hitlikehammers November 19 2009, 03:58:15 UTC
So good to know it wasn't just me that this pairing jumped out at! Thank you so much!

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