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hitlikehammers

Fic: Deus Ex Machina (1/1)

Oct 17, 2009 01:48

Title: Deus Ex Machina
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Peter/Gabriel
Word Count: 1,077
Summary: He lives his life by the clock. For viole2xta at demonqueen666’s Sweet Drabblethon; Prompt “Peter/Gabriel: they meet in college before show events.” General Series Spoilers for Heroes.
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot.
Author’s Notes: For viole2xta - I am a firm believer that Gabriel ( Read more... )

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Comments 15

lornrocks October 17 2009, 07:15:26 UTC

I like the title, and I like the way you characterized Gabriel.

I'd be interested to read more like this. :)

hitlikehammers October 19 2009, 20:03:00 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

eternal_moonie October 17 2009, 07:38:56 UTC

LOVE it! LOVE the pairing! LOVE how you wrote Gabriel

hitlikehammers October 19 2009, 20:03:34 UTC

Thank you!

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hitlikehammers October 19 2009, 20:03:48 UTC

Thank you so much.

wickedpurrz October 17 2009, 22:46:18 UTC

This was amazing. Well written and paced and the angst is sublime. Awesome stuff. =]

hitlikehammers October 19 2009, 20:04:07 UTC

Thank you! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it.

demonqueen666 October 18 2009, 02:18:57 UTC

Oh, wonderful. I love how you wrote it around Gabriel's predilictions toward clocks and time and figuring things out, using that as a theme to drive the piece. You have some wonderfully descriptive imagery capturing the physicality and intimacy between them. Very well done, you.

hitlikehammers October 19 2009, 20:05:49 UTC

Thank you so much; I'm thrilled that you thought the thematic focus of time and clocks worked here, and that the physical element and the intimacy came across :D