Fic: Par Avion (1/1)

[hitlikehammers]

Title: Par Avion (or five messages no one ever expected Jim Kirk to have received, and one he spent ages dreading, but never got)
Rating: PG-13
Character/Pairing: James T. Kirk; Kirk/McCoy
Word Count: 1,958
Summary: Five messages no one ever expected Jim Kirk to have received, and one he spent ages dreading, but never got. For the cliche_bingo Prompt -

Comments

[eeyore9990]

Wow, that's such a powerful bit of writing. I loved the different formats. Well done. This one will stick with me for a while!

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you so much! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the different formats, as well as the writing itself :D

[lisamariedavis]

And he doesn’t have to reach out for his lover, his partner, his whole fucking world, because he reaches out for Jim, arms slung around him, stubble grating at the soft lines in the skin of his neck.

God, I love that line!

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you so much!

[comically_so]

I loved it! Very creative.

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you! :)

[arcane_lark]

Oh wow. These are beautiful, visually and subject matter-ly.

I particularly loved the Jo one, but I'm just a giant Jo fangirl, so take that for what it's worth.

And it is nothing even in the same universe as crap, so stop telling yourself that!

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you so much! And it's strange - I never really thought of myself as a Jo fangirl, but lately, I've had so many ideas involving her. Maybe I'm just in denial or something ;)

And I'm really, really happy you didn't think it was crap - I'm not at all comfortable with writing fluff, so I'm glad it worked out well this time :D

[v_chan_paradise]

It's great!!!! marvelous job on the letters too!!
just one question : who is the Jace of the handwriten letter?

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you very much! And Jace is just a semi-androgynous name I chose for some undisclosed OC-former-lover of Kirk's. So, Jace is whoever you want him/her to be :)