Fic: Like Rivers, Like Wine (1/3)

[hitlikehammers]

Title: Like Rivers, Like Wine
Rating: R
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Word Count: 4,589
Summary: Destiny isn’t patient, doesn’t wait whilst its pawns prepare themselves for what’s to come. Whether that’s a blessing or a curse is yet to be seen. Follows directly after Parting Of The Sensory. Spoilers for Star Trek XI (2009), Star Trek: Countdown. Vague

Comments

[afterburn]

/cries until Spock and Kirk will finally talk

otherwise your Bones makes me smile a lot♥

[hitlikehammers]

Thanks so much! I pretty much adore Bones, so the fact that he makes you smile makes me smile :)

[afterburn]

and as long as we're both smiling, then everything is ok :D

[renchan]

oh god. I think you just broke me.

♥ while waiting for the next chapter.

[hitlikehammers]

Awww, thank you! Hopefully I'll have the next bit up soon :)

[clair3]

great job!

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you!

[et_tu_lj]

This is wonderful. Your prose is a thing of beauty, even when the emotions are pain and despair. The cadence of it is beautiful, making me read most of it aloud for the feel of it. I will be going back to read the previous section, and eagerly looking for more from you.

One typo:
To feel heavy to the point where is crushes his lungs and drags him back to waking. is=it

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you ever so much, really and truly. I am absolutely thrilled that you so enjoyed this, particularly the cadence of it - that was generally the point (well, my point in terms of what I wanted to work on in the writing) of doing a follow-up to this, as an exercise in altered flow; so that you enjoyed it makes me extremely happy :)

And thank you for pointing out the typo! I am, at present, without a Trek beta, and I was proofreading it myself around 2 AM... so I appreciate the assistance.

[phoenixfire12]

Wow. Awsome. *looking around for more of the same....*

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you so much :)

[mithrial]

Wow - Intense writing - great stuff!

Looking out for the next part.

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you!