Fic: Sunny Side Up (1/1)

Apr 12, 2009 18:49

Title: Sunny Side Up
Rating: PG
Pairing: Sawyer/Juliet
Word Count: 1,118
Summary: She’s a little too eager to give up on them. For the 50scenes Prompt #40 - Breakfast. Spoilers through 5.10 - He’s Our You.
Prompt Table: Here
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot.
Author’s Notes: There are certain Suliet scenes that stick out to me when I watch them as ( Read more... )

fanfic:challenge, pairing:lost:sawyer/juliet, fanfic:pg, fanfic, fanfic:oneshot, fanfic:lost, character:lost:james “sawyer” ford, character:lost:juliet burke, challenge:50scenes

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aegoceros April 12 2009, 23:57:15 UTC
Ahh, this is so impossibly sad. I love how you took such a short scene and voiced all of the thoughts behind what we could see on screen. And so wonderfully in character :]

*melt* I love Sawyer and Juliet's relationship.

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hitlikehammers April 13 2009, 12:51:19 UTC
Thank you ever so much! I am thrilled that you thought it was in character, too :)

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whimsey April 13 2009, 02:44:10 UTC
Oh. I love this.

I love how Sawyer can read Juliet and vice versa. And I love how Juliet seems lost in this because of Jack, Kate, and the rest of them coming back.

I like this line: And this time he’s sure, absolutely certain that he can fix this - because he has to. Because if Sawyer doesn't fix it, his life with Juliet will fall. He doesn't want that. He has an absolutely perfect life with Juliet.

Amazing. :D

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hitlikehammers April 13 2009, 12:54:04 UTC
Thank you so very much; I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

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op_de_radio April 13 2009, 08:03:59 UTC
You seriously made that scene ten amazing minutes longer than it actually was. You drew forth so many emotions from it. AMAZING MATE!
SULIET FTW!

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hitlikehammers April 13 2009, 12:56:49 UTC
Thank you! I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it, and of course SULIET FTW! ;)

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wtfsignmeup2 April 13 2009, 10:04:18 UTC
Aww thank you for making one of my favourite scenes between them even more beautiful. Really great insight too.

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hitlikehammers April 13 2009, 12:57:42 UTC
Thank you; I'm glad that you enjoyed it :D

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tellshannon815 April 13 2009, 11:41:31 UTC
Loved this - great insight into what they would be thinking. I really hope these two go the distance!

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hitlikehammers April 13 2009, 12:59:06 UTC
Thank you! And as for them going the distance... me too. They just really work together.

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