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hitlikehammers

Fic: Hear No Evil (1/1)

Apr 06, 2009 20:42

Title: Hear No Evil
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Sawyer/Juliet, implied Sawyer/Kate
Word Count: 2,707
Summary: She’s the sort of woman, apparently, that will forever be kicked when she’s down. For the 50scenes Prompt #1 - Twilight. Sequel to One, but can be read alone. Spoilers through 5.09 - Namaste.
Prompt Table: Here
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot. ( Read more... )

fanfic:challenge, pairing:lost:sawyer/juliet, fanfic, fanfic:pg-13, fanfic:oneshot, fanfic:lost, character:lost:james “sawyer” ford, pairing:lost:sawyer/kate, character:lost:juliet burke, challenge:50scenes

Comments 30

angela_weber April 7 2009, 01:26:29 UTC

Oh my, you've made me cry now. Ahh--this is gorgeous! Juliet breaking down in fic, and James comforting her, is one of my favorite things in fic ever, and you did it so beautifully. Wonderful!

hitlikehammers April 8 2009, 12:00:57 UTC

Aww, thank you! I'm thrilled you enjoyed this :)

prerogativ2315 April 7 2009, 02:30:38 UTC

oh man... that was everything I've ever wantd in a fic from these two, wow, it was... wow. Please make a part 2 or something? It was amazing. I think it would begreart if you wrote this same exact scene but from Sawyer's point of view... Could you please?I would love that. Just a suggestion/request.

hitlikehammers April 8 2009, 12:02:09 UTC

Wow - thank you so much! And a part two? That would be interesting... I'll ponder it, and see if anything comes of it :)

op_de_radio April 7 2009, 03:41:35 UTC

Holy shit.
That was beautiful. Beautifully written.
It was amazing and sad and hopeful all at the same time.
:]
Fucking awesome.

hitlikehammers April 8 2009, 12:02:35 UTC

Thank you ever so much :)

pengyn April 7 2009, 05:01:33 UTC

*happy sigh*

Once again, a truly wonderful fic. Angst, coupled with a a great ending is definitely my favourite kind. My poor heart nearly bled with Juliet's. Thank you for writing and sharing!

hitlikehammers April 8 2009, 12:05:00 UTC

Thank you! And yes, angst that ends well is usually the best kind ;)

whimsey April 7 2009, 06:17:58 UTC

Oh. Utterly heartbreaking.

As soon as I got to the part when Juliet was sitting in the tub with her knees against her chest...I got all emotional. Juliet tries so hard to stay strong, but in the end, she is like any other woman, afraid of being left alone.

Absolutely wonderful job! I hope you write more Sawyer/Juliet stories because your stories are absolutely beautiful.

hitlikehammers April 8 2009, 12:07:03 UTC

Thank you! I agree - I see Juliet as being strong as anything, but not without her own insecurities. And as for more, they're on the way - this prompt table thing has given me so many ideas!