Fic: Stop Crying Your Heart Out (1/1)

[hitlikehammers]

Title: Stop Crying Your Heart Out
Rating: PG
Pairing: Sawyer/Juliet
Word Count: 2,142
Summary: The truth of it is, he’s all she has on this Island, and he’s slowly becoming all that she wants. For the 50scenes Prompt #26 - Adoration. Sequel to Absolutely, but can be read alone. Spoilers through 5.08 - LaFleur.
Prompt Table: Here
Disclaimer: I own nothing

Comments

[whimsey]

I love this!

When Juliet said, “You scared me", I was not expecting her to say that. I expected her to say something like "I'm glad you're okay", but "you scared me" felt perfect for Juliet to say to Sawyer.

Awesome job! More please!

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you! And I'm sooo glad you liked that bit, and didn't think it over the top or out of character. I debated with it for a while, but ultimately figured that, if this was going to be taking place somewhere at least a year or two into their Dharma-period, there would have obviously been a great deal of development regarding their relationship. But yeah - enough of my ramlbing; I'm thrilled you enjoyed this :)

And as for more... I'm working diligently on this prompt table - I'm between some post-LaFleur Kate complication and a two- or three-part pre-romance bit with Richard making a significant appearance; any preference? ;)

[wtfsignmeup2]

This was so good!

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you!

[afishwithawish]

I am completely in love with your writing and your JJ stories (I can't remember if I've said this in another comment, too. If not well there you have it! :D ). It's not off character at all, I think, but even if it were, your skills are so amazing I'm sure I would love it!♥
I liked the lack of dialogue and how you focused on the description of her emotions. Seriously, your writing is so wonderful! (I am not English, but even though my knowledge-level is pretty good I still have to look some words up! I love that too! :D Advanced vocabulary is one of your many talents in writing that I love! ^^ )
I am so very glad there are 46 ff to go! :D
So..Great work, of course!Keep it up!

[hitlikehammers]

Aww, you are truly too kind; I really can't thank you enough for such compliments! I tend to go to extremes with dialogue - it's either pretty much the whole story, or relatively sparse - so I'm glad that this style worked well for you; I generally prefer it, as I think that dialogue isn't so much my strong suit as description. Anyway, I'm thrilled that you're glad there are 46 more left - I'm really enjoying writing these!

And sidenote - I'd have never guessed you weren't a native speaker of English; in your comments, at least, your skill is fantastic. Might I ask what your mother tongue is? *is a complete language geek*

[afishwithawish]

I am Greek! :)
By the way, I am not too kind! You are the one who writes so beautifully! :D I am happy you enjoy writing the fan fics, this means you are not giving up! *yay*

[hitlikehammers]

Greek! That is fantastic; I would absolutely love to go to Greece...

And giving up? Not a chance on this one - I've already got plans for most of those prompts! And I've got something close to a 24-hour round-trip bus ride coming up this weekend... so, perhaps some writing time in the place of sleeping?

[pengyn]

Oh. My. God.

That is all.

Ok so it's not really all, but still! I actually read it this morning before I left for work but didn't have time to comment, so I made sure to come back and do that now. First, I *love* that it follows on from your previous one 'cause I remember thinking last time "No! Don't leave me there!" lol. It's beautiful written again, and I really look forward to the times when your name appears on my f-list because I know I'm in for a great fic. Loved the use of Calamity Jane, I could so see that as Juliet's nickname :D

Thanks for sharing!!

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you ever so much! I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this; I'm always skeptical of my more fluffy endeavors, but for as much as I drift towards writing drama, I do love me a happy ending. As such, the fact that you liked it in spite of my skepticism is all the more flattering :)

[nattysxm]

It's beautifully written...perfect!

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you so much!