Fic: Circumambulation (1/1)

Mar 10, 2012 21:53

Title: Circumambulation
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Sherlock/John
Word Count: 2,213
Summary: The phenomenon of mutual gaze proves extraordinary in that, in a single act, it manages to activate all major centres of the brain. Predictably, Sherlock cannot help but test the evidence. It may, in fact, be his undoing.
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot.
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siluria March 11 2012, 13:28:17 UTC
Your language is so beautiful and perfect for the character, Sherlock's thoughts and reasoning, the way he approaches his task... just wonderful *sigh*

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hitlikehammers March 25 2012, 18:06:48 UTC
You are far too kind -- thank you so much, doll. I was apprehensive, writing for a British fandom for the first time in such a long time, but that you liked it? That absolutely makes my day.

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weepingnaiad March 11 2012, 23:16:33 UTC
Oh, m'dear!

*flails*

This was beautiful! So romantic and so Sherlock! The language was perfect for him. I think I loved just how terrified he was... so affected.

So, so wonderful!

<3

You are so good to me, sweetie! So very good to me!

*hugs*

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hitlikehammers March 25 2012, 18:07:14 UTC
Doll, I am so happy you enjoyed this, you have no idea. Thank you.

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slothfulzel March 12 2012, 03:12:45 UTC
Your descriptions and imagery are second to none, as is your spot-on characterization.

Bravo, darling, I enjoyed this completely.

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hitlikehammers March 25 2012, 18:07:39 UTC
Goodness, thank you so, so much, truly. I am absolutely thrilled that you enjoyed this.

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gottalovev March 12 2012, 18:13:23 UTC
oh wow. I feel I need to read this 30 more times to get all of the nuances and marvel on how greatly you capture Sherlock and his manic energy. this is gorgeous ♥

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hitlikehammers March 25 2012, 18:07:58 UTC
Thank you so much, doll, truly. <3

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ariadnechan March 16 2012, 10:53:37 UTC
OMG you feel him all the emotions and the supernova with him within John's eyes

he is truly lost he is totally lost in there

i really love it!!

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hitlikehammers March 25 2012, 18:08:20 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm so pleased you enjoyed this :)

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