Fic: Eclipse (14/?)

[hitlikehammers]

Title: Eclipse
Rating: R
Pairing: Ten/Donna (Friendship, UST)
Word Count: 1,626
Summary: If it hadn’t been so exhilarating, it may well have been absolutely humiliating. Spoilers for Doctor Who 4.13 - Journey’s End.
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot. Story title inspired by The Frames.
Author’s Notes: Just a tiny little interlude, because

Comments

[rita28]

This story really is quite enchanting...Thanks for writing it!

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you for reading it! :)

[hitlikehammers]

Your excitement makes me positively giddy :)

[hitlikehammers]

It will be, hopefully soon. :) I am thinking tonight or tomorrow... I have to make the breaking of this UST work with me; I am skeptical if it's up to par as it stands at the present.

[sweetsyren]

it may have been her imagination - may have been nothing more than wishful thinking - but she could have sworn that she fit against him just a bit closer than before as she pressed against his side once more.

LOVE LOVE LOVE this! I love the way you are describing this, although, can I tell you something?? I do want to smack him slightly for being oblivious, lol!

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you so much; and don't worry, he won't be completely oblivious for much longer. I don't have the kind of patience to make him hold out forever ;)

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you so much, as always. And for the record, you are anything but boring and repetitive, dear; on the contrary, your comments are sometimes all that give me the push to go and write some more - and certainly, they more than make my day whenever I see them :) More soon, indeed; well, I was going to hold off until next week, really... but perhaps tonight or tomorrow, if you're really wanting more? (And I won't lie, I am a bit excited for the coming parts... because as much as I enjoy UST, I enjoy even more when it shatters ;) )

[hitlikehammers]

Everything, all of that, right back at you, dear :)

And yay for Pushing Daisies! I can't wait for the new episodes to begin!

[chloris]

Lovely new chapter! I'm really enjoying the gradual buildup of the UST between them. This hits a kink of mine of them needing to be in physical contact. Now that Donna can no longer deny her feelings for him every touch seems electric. I know that you're doing this from Donna's POV, but I'm wondering what the Doctor is thinking here.

And, hey, enough with the apologies in advance! You sound like my mother. *g* I love the woman but she's always telling us how awful the food is before she serves it. Which it never is - she's a wonderful cook.

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you so much, really and truly. Like I've said, I was a bit skeptical of the length of the UST in this story, but I am so pleased that it's not annoying or anything, for the most part. Nonetheless, it's seeing its end in the next chapter or two, and I am actually going to try to write a bit of genuine romance for that bit ;) Without apologies, hopefully ;)

And to respond to your inquiry of POV, we'll be hearing from the Doctor again, though it might be a while still. However, now that you mention it, I'd love to write a few of these scenes from his perspective... maybe I'll do an interlude or something sometime?