Fic: The World Bereft (1/1)

[hitlikehammers]

Title: The World Bereft
Rating: R
Pairings/Characters: Adam/Master, mild Jacob/Esau, background Master/Doctor; Adam Monroe, The Master, Jacob, Esau
Word Count: 5,363
Summary: The immortal side of Purgatory. For aurilly, who requested ”Doctor Who/Heroes; Doctor Who/Lost; Adam/Master; The Master as the main DW character; Something with the Master and Jacob”

Comments

SQUEE

[aurilly]

This my dear, is INCREDIBLE. SO much more than I could have imagined. I honestly hadn't imagined anything except "Hey, my three favorite immortals." All three POVs are so powerful.

First off, Jacob/MIB is amazing. You really have their dynamic. And I love the little differences Jacob notices, when it's a monster and when it's his brother. I am one of those who kind of pipty Jacob, who had to spend 2000 years with a monstrous version of his brother. Their parts were deliciously painful to read.

from a year that everyone who was worth anything managed to forget
I love how/when Adam and The MAster met. During the year that never was. So fitting! And I love that Adam wants to think of him as Harold. I can totally see Adam latching onto a promising politician like that only to find out what he really was. Typical. :)

“What are you?” And it’s the what that shows that he’s learned in his years, knows when something is larger than who.LOVE THIS SO MUCH. Perfect. it's exactly the kind of immortal stuff that I love to bits. Yay! Oh, Adam,

Re: SQUEE

[hitlikehammers]

I cannot possibly convey to you how happy I am that you enjoyed this, doll -- I was rather worried about it, so truly: thank you so much.

I’m particularly pleased you thought that the Jacob/MIB dynamic was on-target -- I do so enjoy writing them :) But that you thought The Master and Adam worked as well, and that the dialogue and the snark and the annoyingness-that-hopefully-wasn’t-too-annoying, and the cracky-humor-angst, that you thought it all was fitting -- just, I really cannot thank you enough, for both your enjoyment and your unbelievably amazing feedback <3

[magicamethyst80]

Hope you don't mine if I give you a play by play review of this fic. I love a good Whoniverse/Lost crossover! First off, excellent interaction between the MIB and Jacob. Love the idea that they are bringing The Master and Adam Monroe into their little game

[hitlikehammers]

I cannot possibly tell you how flattered I am by such thorough feedback! I'm thrilled that you thought the interactions worked, and that the dynamics seemed to make sense between the various characters -- and that you felt that the "Island as a Time Vortex" idea made some degree of sense! Thank you so much for reading and commenting; I'm so pleased you enjoyed this!

[magicamethyst80]

You are welcome, as I said while I've seen a number of Lost/Whoniverse crossovers not enough people are penning them! There is so much potential in having not just The Doctor interact with various Lost entities, but The Master, former companions, Jack Harkness, and other Torchwood characters as well.

Also with Island as a Time Vortex, which has been on Earth for thousands of years, but with very few know about it? All kinds of potential!

Wondering where a "write a Doctor Who/Lost" crossover challenge can be posted, lol? Perhaps make the boundaries for Doctor Who "no going beyond what has been aired on TV, and with Lost, no ARG!