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fic: heart printed ribbon

Aug 01, 2008 05:37

Title: Heart Printed Ribbon
Fandom: Original
Characters/Pairing: Penelope Harper, Rupert Ash, Aurelie Durand, Rupert/Penelope
Summary: She sort of trails off there, afraid that she had changed her mind mid-sentence and not really realised.
Rating: PG or so. (Some things implied but not said.)
Notes: This started out as something else entirely, but ( Read more... )

pairing: rupert/penelope, fic: original, character: penelope harper, character: aurelie durand, character: rupert ash

Comments 24

flatlined July 31 2008, 20:57:18 UTC

*aww* (I did that out-loud, btw.)

I just- love everything about it. (the title also) *sighs happily*
& I have to read it again (many more times)
It will probably be one of my favorite things (not just by you, but in general)

(I want to say something beautiful and worth remembering but I'm all blank)

andsheloves July 31 2008, 21:48:18 UTC

Aw, I'm so so glad that you like it, hun. ♥

(BTW, how was your birthday? ... AND! i've been looking at your recent icon posts, and ohmygosh, so good.)

slightlymore July 31 2008, 21:11:26 UTC

I loved this and I could bring up a ton of quotes that made me smile wistfully but I'll refrain. ♥

"How do you love me?"

Her fingers dangle over his, not quite touching, but willing them to move.

"Hopelessly." He breathes, hands light over her stomach, leaving a trail of goosebumps.

Well, just that one anyway. lol.

andsheloves July 31 2008, 21:47:12 UTC

Aw, thank you. ♥

vhari July 31 2008, 23:34:07 UTC

Have I told you that I love you for this? I do. A LOT.

mush, I am mush.

"Oh-" she sighs into his mouth.

*dies*

♥♥♥♥♥♥

andsheloves July 31 2008, 23:35:08 UTC

Well, thank you dear. ♥ You're too nice.

salianka August 1 2008, 21:28:03 UTC

NEW RUPER/PENELOPE! I guess you found some inspirations in Spain, as you wanted to?

Well, I love it. I love everything about it. You know I think you're good writer and you're great with words, but this is SO lovely & beautiful. It's perfect. I think I'm melting a bit indside.

She takes his hand gently, trying to tell him what she doesn't know how to say aloud. His fingers slip through hers, and when she looks up, he's walking away. She wants to say "Stop." and "Don't go." and "Please.", but her voice is caught somewhere between her heart and her throat, and all that comes out is a whisper.
"Darling-"
♥♥♥

andsheloves August 1 2008, 21:43:08 UTC

Yes, I did. ♥

Awwwww, thank you. :)

my_end_begins August 2 2008, 00:12:00 UTC

*heart breaks*

why is everything about love so beautiful even when it hurts!

You write it so perfectly!

andsheloves August 2 2008, 09:14:17 UTC

Awwww, thank you. ♥