What Starts in Chaos

Jun 14, 2011 04:01

“Jinki, I don’t understand why you’re being so selfish.”

“Mom, I just. Okay.” Jinki exhales slowly, pacing himself, hands flat on their dining room table. His mother is still looking at him with a pointed expression as if she knows exactly what he’s about to say and it makes Jinki’s tongue inch back a bit. “It’s not about. I’m not being selfish, ( Read more... )

pairing: jongho, pairing: jongyu, fandom: shinee, fic: what starts in chaos

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Spot for JONGHYUN hipslip June 13 2011, 20:09:17 UTC
lalalala~ told you i would write long, weird banter jongyu. i've had this in the works for a while. for some odd reason i had difficulty completing it.

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Re: Spot for JONGHYUN jonghyun June 14 2011, 05:26:16 UTC

YAYYYYY I'm still at work sobs. First thing I shall do when I get home is read this. I wanna go home already T___T

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Re: Spot for JONGHYUN jonghyun June 14 2011, 13:43:34 UTC

WAIT. the other 2 parts. how soon is SOON? why you leave me hanging? and nope, i have not read it yet lmao bc i saw the note :))

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Re: Spot for JONGHYUN hipslip June 14 2011, 14:46:17 UTC
WOMAN WAE YOU NO READ!!! read it. LOL. the other parts are done naman eh. i'm just being stingy. LOL. also i wanna update middlemen before this ends. let's say it's to make up for a few things... ehem.

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a_life_defiant June 13 2011, 20:40:57 UTC
SPOT. My spot. right here.

I shall return for you.

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a_life_defiant June 13 2011, 22:32:31 UTC
“Yeah, mom, you’re talking about my room. It’s not a ready room or a hotel room or a guest room, mom, it’s my room. M. Y. MY.”
“Oh, Jinki, you’re being such a D. I. C. K. Dick.”
LMAO, so OWNED. And by your umma. *giggles forever*

“It’s high school, baby. Everywhere’s hell. Just have to go with the lesser evil, you know?”

Gurrrrl, PREACH.

“And I love my baby boy so much coz he makes every puzzle his bitch!”

So I’m a little bit in love w/Jinki’s mom here. Do you think she wants the title of ‘cougar’? I’m down to be her much younger lover.

Jonghyun answers Jinki with a polite smile that reaches his eyes, taking his bag from the floor and plopping it back down on the cream sheets. Jinki stares at the bag. “I guess this’ll be my side then.”

What a cheeky little asshole. I LOVE IT! XD
“Oh, you mean that time when you woke up and I was on the floor? Yeah, that doesn’t count.”

I’m sensing that someone got forcibly kicked off the bed and onto said floor…

He doesn’t even like Golden Grahams. He keeps it there because they’re ( ... )

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hipslip June 14 2011, 14:51:20 UTC
your comment. i like. ♥

So I’m a little bit in love w/Jinki’s mom here. Do you think she wants the title of ‘cougar’? I’m down to be her much younger lover.
-- i have no idea. his mom's got her way of dealing with things so... HAHA

HUZZAH for a Powder reference. I love that movie.
-- me tooooo~

thank you for consistently commenting and i appreciate the read. :)

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plenty8 June 13 2011, 22:18:56 UTC
ooh this is interesting :D

i wonder if Jjong and Minho actually have something going on or not..

can't wait for more!

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hipslip June 14 2011, 16:53:15 UTC
thank you~ :)

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ruledaworld June 13 2011, 22:25:43 UTC
Ah, I'm a total sucker for jongyu & jongho.

To be honest, I was a little unsure when I started reading, but now I really want to read more. Jinki's crazy and Jonghyun's troublesome but maybe a little misunderstood, and the banter between the two is just great! I love it.

Small small question. Did Jonghyun know Minho before moving, or did I just confuse myself?

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hipslip June 14 2011, 16:32:05 UTC
jongyu and jongho<3 i know what you mean~~

minho and jonghyun only met after jonghyun moved :)

thank you so much for reading and commenting :)

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min7girl June 13 2011, 23:35:31 UTC
I'm all kinds of into this!!!!

Thank you for writing it. I will wait patiently for the next two chapters!!!

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hipslip June 14 2011, 16:30:34 UTC
thank you~~~ will update soon :)

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