Come Pick Me Up

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“Sunyoung-ah!” Krystal’s voice causes Sunyoung to pull away from the receiver of her wireless phone. “You aren’t speaking again.”

“I’m typing is why.” Sunyoung explains irritatingly as she shoves her reading glasses back up her nose. She clips the phone in between her shoulder and her ear in order to make use of both her hands on the keyboard,

Comments

[orenmanida]

oh, this is so sweet. i love the way you characterized both taemin and luna -- not the usual, stereotypical baby taemin and perfect luna. they're very real and endearing and i like the premise and the progression to the bathroom confrontation. like the draw of a chick flick with a dose of reality thrown in. and those barbecue chips! hahaha, i really loved their recurrence in this fic. =) thank you for sharing this!! i really enjoyed it. ♥

[somesrsbsns]

this was so cute. I found myself laughing out loud over some parts, especially when Luna was all flustered, flailing about and whatnot.

and this:
“What’s the matter?” Taemin straightens in his seat, hands patting his fringe down. “Don’t recognize me with my clothes on?”
I about died.

i highly enjoyed reading this! (:

[eiresione]

I absolutely adore this story. :) I've always been a fan of this pairing and thought they're really cute and precious together. This was a really enjoyable read; I especially liked the last few paragraphs -- so sweet, I just love it to pieces. :) Thank you for writing this! :)

[kaybee38]

This is just so incredibly sweet and funny! Great work!

[jinkibumiminho]

Just precious! I was all sad there for a minute, but you gave it a happy ending. Very sweet!