Comments | hipslip: Noir

hipslip

Noir

Jan 22, 2014 03:04

rating: pg
genre: humor, au
pairing: kai/chanyeol
length: one-shot
word count: 7k~ w
summary: kai gets dumped.

( I want this blister on my foot to fuck off already. I’ve had it for more than a month now. I tried to pop it, but my girlfriend said that if I did, it would get an infection. Well, ex-girlfriend. Which brings me to my next point; I want a relationship that doesn’t have an expiration date earlier than the healing time of my fucking blister, which I popped. I did. )

fic: noir, fandom: exo, pairing: kai/chanyeol

Comments 21

mhn77 January 21 2014, 22:02:42 UTC

aah~ I always love getting lost in your writing for a moment in time
thanks for sharing <3

hipslip January 22 2014, 13:58:33 UTC

thank you for reading my writing continuously o.o and for commenting when you can. i really appreciate it.

acng1993 January 21 2014, 22:20:40 UTC

Woah, I was kind of expecting this to be a fluffy cafe love story but this is...unreal.
So good! I love the chemistry between Jongin and Chanyeol.

“Please, I’ve realized that I like you a lot. Blister and all.”
"Get off me!"
Kai just kiss Chanyeol already pleaseeeeeee

"You have really nice hands."
Chanyeol is so...idek. Sweet. Adorable

i hope everyone else enjoys figuring this out. ^^
Please relieve my suffering. Where is Chanyeol? What happened to him? Is he not human or something??

hipslip January 22 2014, 13:59:48 UTC

thank you so much for reading, and for your comment. as for your questions (and everyone else's), everything here is open to interpretation. so there's really no wrong way of looking at it. ^^

purpleunihorn January 22 2014, 00:50:27 UTC

Yes jongin, come to Angola...come
I shall welcome you warmly

hipslip January 22 2014, 14:00:14 UTC

lol, please take care of him during his visit.

purpleunihorn January 24 2014, 03:21:54 UTC

Oh i will!
Why Angola anyways?? Not many people even know it, and then i find it in an exo fic

chnyls January 22 2014, 02:13:29 UTC

IS CHANYEOL ONE OF KAI'S FANS COME TO LIFE
I DONT UNDERSTAND
but i loved this nonetheless^^

hipslip January 22 2014, 14:01:06 UTC

anyway you interpret it is fine since the whole fic is up to you to decipher. ^^ i wanted to see how readers would piece it together as they read, and everything has been interesting so far. thank you for reading and commenting!

anonymous January 22 2014, 02:21:07 UTC

i have to anon cause i forgot my lj password- but this fic was absolutely beautiful.
i don't exactly understand who or what chanyeol is still, but i love the theme of being and feeling alive here. in the beginning, jongin resented the unimportant things in his life and with chanyeol's help, his eyes seem to have opened and he's taking a big step forward. i absolutely love this!

hipslip January 22 2014, 14:02:22 UTC

i'm sorry you forgot your password, anon! better get on that. but i love your take on the story. i didn't plan on anything definite while writing this so that i could see how the readers would interpret it, so any guess is fine.