Blackfish; Chapter 1

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rating: pg - 13 to r
genre: psychological, humor
pairing: onew/taemin
length: chaptered
word count: ~2k w
summary: a deconstructed coming of age story that features two boys; one who sticks out by default while the other is invisible to the radar by choice.
warnings: (as the chapters progress) disturbing themes, violence, blood
a/n: as a whole,

Comments

[soypants]

This story is shaping up to be so wonderful. I really enjoyed reading this and the way you write just engulfs the reader into this alternate world right from the first few words and your descriptions flow so easily into one another that reading this is as easy as breathing. I am really loving Taemin's characterization, as well!

The plot is very interesting so far, this story is very unique because I don't believe I've ever read something with a setting/author's voice similar to this which makes me even more eager to read on!

You continue to impress me!

I look forward to the next chapter! :)

[hipslip]

;; thank you. i'm so glad that you're enjoying this so far.

[acng1993]

I like how slow this is progressing (makes me feel like the fic will be longer hopefully lol). Can't wait for the next update! Keep up the good work.

[hipslip]

i actually plan on making it as short as i possibly can considering what i have planned :)) but we'll see how that goes. thank you for reading and commenting ^^

[guren382]

So I've just visited the lj of my favorite author hoping that I will find something new but not really believing it and then BAM I find two chapters of new story and it's about my otp..can life get any better? Apparently yes it can because this story starts of really great ! Can't wait till the new chapter !

[hipslip]

you're so lovely ;; i'm glad you're enjoying this. i feel rather passionate about this story and hope to execute it well. thank you again :)

[guren382]

Most of the time I'm a silent Reader because English isn't my native language but as I saw that this story has only few comments I needed to do something about it because it deserves do much more attention like any other of your masterpieces ;) and also I hope you know exactly how wonderful of an author you are !
I'm waiting for another update ^^

[imvus]

Sorry the internet is not working with me and since I can't read, write or talk in Korean I am having issues getting any answers to why the damn thing isn't working right.

I am thoroughly enjoying this. So much mystery and this mood...what is it that I am feeling? I don't know yet but there's definitely something there. I always love it when you describe things because your descriptions allow me to be right there with them.

favorite line: ***Jongin was next to him, standing with his weight on one leg, stare wandering toward the girl whose uniform skirt was being made victim to a light breeze. He was still grinning when Taemin stood up to hold his bike steady.***

the 'victim to a light breeze' love it!!!

[elena0ena]

yesss, you wrote another ontae!!
can't wait for the rest of story, i love the way you portray taemin till now, ^^