Graceless

May 15, 2012 01:14

Two
pg - 13 to nc - 17 // sehun/chanyeol // ~3k w

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pairing: sehun/chanyeol, fandom: exo, fic: graceless

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tiggie0307 May 14 2012, 21:36:20 UTC
I find myself laughing at Sehun chok/laugh-ing at what Chanyeol is doing.

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haiiro_ai May 14 2012, 21:36:51 UTC
WAH

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haiiro_ai May 14 2012, 21:39:54 UTC

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grumpybiscuit May 14 2012, 23:52:11 UTC
Its really sad knowing what Sehoon has gone through. The time he spent training, doubting bout the way he looks, the insecurities basically but this line totally turn me off. The thin dark crops hypnotize Sehoon for a split second I laughed so hard cos I was concentrating on his views, imagining what is going on until I read the hair. Thanks for that!

OMG the whole hygiene conversation just hilarious. And Sehoon's imagination on Chanyeol and him bobbing something is well, very distracting....I must say.
And wow...Minji.....hmm....

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re_lla May 15 2012, 06:53:19 UTC
sigh ... sehun still carrying that pressure around him ; ;
but i know sometimes it's hard to let go and relax easily.
actually, i didn't laugh when chanyeol said about brushed his teeth but i laugh because sehun is nearly died by laughing LOOOOL
poor boy ᄏᄏᄏ
and wow ..... O_____________O
minji ... at first i really have no idea what's he doing and just randomly think about that girl, but not so soon i finally realize lol

thanks ~

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mhn77 May 15 2012, 10:53:37 UTC
< insert praise from chap one > cos I started to write out this comment and it was just all the same :b
I'm really liking your writing style for this, and I'm really liking you Sehun. On one hand I'm feeling bad for him cos he seems lonely in a sense, but at the same time he seems fine in his own little world idk..

Btw internal mini-squeal about his armpit moment!! I have a thing for pits hai dp

And that whole laughing fit had me laugh out loud :D I dunno, that whole situation of trying to suppress a huge laugh when everyone else is just looking all O____O I could really relate to that xD

The blowjob caught me by surprise tho, but I'm really interested to see if it's just a "random" mentioning of yet another side to his life or if it'll play some sort of role for the rest of the story.

I can't wait for your next chapter~♥

Oh, and I followed you on twitter^^ just cos..

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