this ship, this fic, i'm dedz. /memming, jelly, sobbing your writing style is fracking amazing and i can so painfully relate to socially-awkward!sehun since i'm just the same myself. meanwhile this mainly has a dull pain settling in my stomach and me promising myself to never become an idol, at the same time everything is just fantastic and i don't even know what kind of plot you have in mind for us but i don't care, will gladly read thousands of words from you.
I really loved this. I haven't seen close narrative styles like this very often in fic, and I really liked how it allowed you to give huge amounts of depth to each of the characters. The focus on detail (and Sehun's fixation on it too) in combination with the transit setting made everything feel like it was in motion, and by the end it felt like I was counting down the seconds along with Sehun. I love what you did with Baekhyun and Chanyeol and Lu Han as well... they all have their little quirks and fixations and coping mechanisms, and I always really enjoy when authors take time to really develop characters. And your description was wonderful; it was very vivid in an almost gritty way, since you didn't gloss over any details that weren't as pretty to describe.
I would love to read a second part! This was fantastic. :) ♥
im so glad this appealed to you. i have to say that the details worried me when i was writing, like, maybe im putting too much of this and that but at the same time, i want everything to be almost tangible if that makes sense. thank you so much for reading and for your encouragement. will update this soon. :)
Once again, your fic has amazed me:) I just love how realistic it seems and how you develop the characters so well! Most people try to start off their story with sudden action or horror, to try and attract the reader instantly, but you just have to write the stuff you do, and BAM! It's genius! :D And you know what? I'm not even a ChanHun shipper (HunHan baised!) but I can tell this is gonna get progressively better and better with the second chapter:))
Can't wait for the next part! *Oh, and I'm also hoping you tell us which fic you're gonna discontinue because then I can stock up on tissues :'P*
But don't worry about my happiness, bb, you do what you gotta do!
***And remember: No matter which fics you drop, I'll always love you*** <3 XD
thank you for being patient with the build up :) i must admit that i did put some effort into creating a mindset for a person i dont know in a situation that i have (more or less) never been in. appreciate your encouragement and wish to make each chapter just as interesting :).
im trying to fight through it, tbh. the whole thing with dropping the fic, i mean. i cant be too sure about it yet so nothings final. thank uou anyway for being supportive :)
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your writing style is fracking amazing and i can so painfully relate to socially-awkward!sehun since i'm just the same myself. meanwhile this mainly has a dull pain settling in my stomach and me promising myself to never become an idol, at the same time everything is just fantastic and i don't even know what kind of plot you have in mind for us but i don't care, will gladly read thousands of words from you.
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i am all socially awk as well which was why writing this is all from second nature :))
thank you so much for reading.
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i was thinking you were, actually! (but i couldn't ask lol) the descriptions were just so panifully accurate.
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I would love to read a second part! This was fantastic. :) ♥
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Can't wait for the next part! *Oh, and I'm also hoping you tell us which fic you're gonna discontinue because then I can stock up on tissues :'P*
But don't worry about my happiness, bb, you do what you gotta do!
***And remember: No matter which fics you drop, I'll always love you*** <3 XD
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im trying to fight through it, tbh. the whole thing with dropping the fic, i mean. i cant be too sure about it yet so nothings final. thank uou anyway for being supportive :)
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