dead hearts

[hipslip]

Part Two of Two
pg - 13 // krystal/jonghyun // ~13k w
-- wherein jonghyun lives in seoul while
krystal lives in pasadena.

Comments

[psychohippy]

You just made me cry like a baby T_T

[hipslip]

aw, i hope that's a good thing? thank you for reading and commenting. :D

[imvus]

okay I read the first have and you got the whole crazy emotional roller coaster thing down in relationships and I think that is one of the reason I love your writing, you do such a wonderful job of expressing that and keeping it realistic... Sometimes we as females push our own fears onto our men and we need to just relax and let them figure it out for themselves....

off to read second part before I pass out for the night.

[hipslip]

thank you so much.

when i write fics like this i always try to keep it realistic and i'm so glad it worked out for you.

hope you enjoy the second part too :)

[imvus]

I ended up passing out last night so here I am tonight going on 1am finishing...lol

Oh god the fighting....hate it but I do understand Jonghyun when he says he rather be fighting then nothing at all (which means hope, maybe not quite the healthy relationship, but there is still hope) It's better then not caring anymore.

And the whole Yoona thing, She handled that so well, especially at her age. And I can totally understand her being unsure with the girl since she openly admitted that she messed around, but she realized it wasn't about her, it was about Jonghyun....smart, smart girl! Some women never, ever get that!

Wonderful job again expressing all the emotions again, I could feel all her fear and loneliness when he wasn't there with her and her fighting against her own insecurities based on her knowledge of her parents relationships (which can also mess up relationships)

it reminds me of some advice I received about the marriage vows, "what god has brought together, let no man come asunder, and that includes yourself" :)

[hipslip]

i love writing fighting scenes :P so glad you found the dynamic of the relationship realistic.

and yes, krystal is a smart girl for the most part. but still human, as we can see.

and that's a beautiful quote btw.

once again, thank you so much for commenting and reading~

[hipslip]

i have a pretty good feeling about them.

i'll never get sick of stories of young love so i'll probably write fics like these more often than i'd like to :D

thank you so much for reading and commenting. so glad you liked it.

[mariposa02]

spot. cause I really love Jonghyun/Krystal ♥

[hipslip]

enjoy~ :D

[mariposa02]

oooh I enjoyed this A LOT :3
this is just beautiful and cute and heartbreaking in a very very realistic way :'D
this fic is a very beautiful piece of art.
♥

[hipslip]

glad you liked it. thank you so much!

[top_fifty]

still bawling over this fic after a few hours :( i havent cried so hard reading a fic ever until i read this one. jongkrys were not actually my ultimate otp but this is sigh so beautiful and touching really it got into my emotion pretty deep and it seemed like a roller coaster ride reading this. either the happy or sad moments in their relationship here you've made it so beautiful and wonderful aaahhhh with how they love each other and jonghyun is a hopeless romantic and so is krystal (in a way imo or idk /incoherent rn tbh). it's just so realistic :(

by the way mind if i friend you? :) and hoping for you to write more! ive been reading your fics and loving it~

[hipslip]

aw, i know it's not the most appropriate response but i'm glad that this fic has touched you to the point of tears. i never imagined this kind of reaction and seeing as a couple of you have commented with similar emotions... quite frankly, i can't be more pleased. lol.

and np. added~ :)