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Come One, Come All

Jul 19, 2011 16:19

Come one, come all
R // JongTae&TaeKey&OnTae&2min // ~700 w
( When Taemin likes it a little rough he goes to Jonghyun when the older boy is in the shower. )

fic: come one come all, pairing: 2min, pairing: taekey, pairing: jongtae, fandom: shinee, pairing: ontae, *f-locked

Comments 24

imvus July 19 2011, 16:33:21 UTC

I don't know why but it makes me a little sad. I understand he goes to each for different things but he doesn't seemed satisfied emotionally by any of them. Then when I read Minho's part I thought okay here it is but actually that might have been the worse situation, well, no maybe Jinki.... I want to know more about this onew/jinki

And of course I loved it because it drew out emotions from me. Can I just hug Taemin...spoon him, hold him...god something (then I want to go find out what is going on with Onew/Jinki...keke

haiiro_ai July 20 2011, 00:48:16 UTC

I was just thinking about this sort of thing during work.
So this was like a psychic thing. .___________.

( ... )

kibbumie July 20 2011, 01:59:20 UTC

/DIES
how do you do it- oh god. loved it.
i can't words at this moment
"Gwiboon was more than willing to offer a helping hand. Before much else Taemin would have his hyung pinned on the open pages of his books on the floor, legs spreading, clothes flying."

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" Taemin sees himself in the mirror later that night, marks of lipstick left forlornly staining the corners of his mouth. "

omg i can't even how beautiful is this :(

prettifuliar July 20 2011, 02:19:26 UTC

Wow... Just. O.K. I'm pretty speechless like most of the people that had commented here. xDD I loved this. It was beautiful. ^_^

stjoan4eva July 20 2011, 05:39:12 UTC

Short but powerful. The one about Onew/Jinki I thought was the best, and not because he's my bias. It had deep, deep layers and I loved that.