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Long Overdue - Masterpost

Jul 13, 2012 03:03

Author name: hippivickyx
Artist name: space_zombies
Genre: College!AU
Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 37k+
Warnings: sick!fic, m/m, hurt&comfort, language, violence and torture, PTSD, forced/abusive relationship, non-con.
Summary: Dean Winchester's life was neither simple nor easy, but he was surviving. Going to Lawrence Community College, he was in his way on ( Read more... )

Comments 9

ammiratrice July 13 2012, 15:37:09 UTC

Please, please, don't take this the wrong way because I really don't mean to offend you or anything, but you may want to recheck this story of yours. I was so happy to find another Dean/Cas fic and started reading chapter one, but it's so difficult to read as you are changing from present tense to past and back all the time. It's really irritating and English isn't even my mother tongue...
Your summary sounds interesting and I think it would be a pity to have the story spoiled by such a thing. Again, no offense...

hippivickyx July 13 2012, 18:26:27 UTC

none taken. I am so new at this, I am going through it now and trying to fix it more. Updates will happen in a week or so if you wanna wait. but the tenses might not change drastically cus I'm new. haha. thanks! NOOB ALERT I KNOW

dawnmyst July 13 2012, 16:14:38 UTC

Hi there,

I made a PDF of your fic for you

http://www.mediafire.com/view/?02k5vm6u5xm258b

haven't read it yet but it looks interesting :D

T hippivickyx July 13 2012, 16:49:33 UTC

Thank you! I wish you asked, cus I found scenes was posted wrong when I was splitting it up. I need to fix them!!! keep in touch and we can re-pdf it once I fix them today! thank you again

Re: T dawnmyst July 14 2012, 02:55:50 UTC

Oh not a problem ... i'll remove the PDF and when everything is fixed just let me know and i'll redo it :D

they're super easy for me to make so it's fine

spartygirl87 July 13 2012, 16:33:32 UTC

I just read the first chapter. And I'm really enjoying it. I didn't notice anything with the tense changes. It looked ok to me. :)
BTW any chance of a PDF.

hippivickyx July 13 2012, 16:55:52 UTC

thanks. i know, I'm horrible at tense changes!(first fic, guilty) anywho. PDF won't be up for another few days. Fixing some stuff.

followthesp1der July 14 2012, 12:00:43 UTC

First, I want to say that taking on the BigBang for a first fic is not only a great challenge, but an excellent achievement, and you should be proud ( ... )

laurapetri July 16 2012, 03:24:39 UTC

I think this was quite well done for a first fic. You should look into spelling/grammar errors/typos as they can some times distract from the flow of the story. I liked the premise and hope you continue writing.