Love Undefined

Jul 07, 2012 23:03

Title: Love Undefined
Rating: NC-17, not at the beginning, but it gets there
Pairing: Lily and Ville, Lily and Bam
Genre: Drama/Romance
Disclaimer: I own Lily as she is a fictional character I created. As for everyone else, don't know and don't own. And I'm sure this never really happened.

a/n: Sorry for taking so long to get my stories updated.  Things ( Read more... )

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lovemetal2000 July 8 2012, 07:09:07 UTC
Wow! I really like your way of keeping the suspense high . Ville is amazing in this chapter. This story is my addiction for sure.

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grumpybluebear July 8 2012, 17:46:44 UTC
Thanks so much. I wanted to show a different side of his character in this chapter and I think it worked out well. More to come soon.

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holylollylola July 8 2012, 08:53:37 UTC
Mama mia !!!! So intense, and sweet, and lovely, and hot !!!! You're a damn good writer Miss ! This story is getting better with each chapter... Thanks a lot for sharing your amazing talent with us greedy readers....

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grumpybluebear July 8 2012, 17:49:24 UTC
Well thanks for reading. It certainly puts a big smile on my face to know that people are reading my little stories :) Makes it worth all the hours I've put into these tales.

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anonymous July 8 2012, 21:59:10 UTC
Thank you for this chapter and for keeping the story exciting. Looking forward to the next one :)

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grumpybluebear July 9 2012, 02:52:37 UTC
Glad you are enjoying the story and thanks for reading. More to come sortly.

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ambirdy July 9 2012, 00:19:52 UTC
What a great and sensitive side of him you are showing. I love to see how caring he is becoming and how his feelings for her seem to be evolving. Well done!

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grumpybluebear July 9 2012, 02:51:29 UTC
Thanks! I'm trying very hard to make his evolving feelings appear natural, not forced or completely unrealistic. Harder than it sounds sometimes.

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dill286 July 10 2012, 10:30:40 UTC
Nice part ! Thanks for still updating !

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grumpybluebear July 12 2012, 05:02:43 UTC
Thanks and good to know you're still reading.
More coming just around the corner.

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