very very personal

[himawarixxsandz]

we're all giving our college essays for a trial run to our ap lit teacher and she's amazing so im actually really excited and nervous for her feedback, but i figured i'd put this up here too, maybe just to see what you guys think since this is writing + my life + kpop all into one big mess.

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[ryophantomhive]

so you are stepping in those hardest months of highschool years. Hwaiting
I really love your writting style, and this is also your biggest advantage. The essay is smooth and great.
as a college essay, this should focus more on you. That's what I think. may be you should edit the first part to be shorter and add more about yourself

[margaretbrown]

That's great, really. And very touching - the part about Zico as well as the rest. That's good to come back here a bit and read some of your amazing writing before diving back into work. =u_u=
I hope your teacher was satisfied ^^