Fanfiction, ahoy!

[lalachoy]

Sorry for posting so soon again but I've been wanting to get this story up almost two months now (and I'm being black-mailed).

Title: Doppelganger
Summary: Doppelgangers, an omen. An evil twin. Hikaru, a cab driver, is bored with life. Maybe a bad omen is all he needs. A really nice, bad omen. HikaruxKaoru AU
Chapter 1/?
Words: 3.652
Rating: I give

Comments

:D

[altus_revera]

Wow, this was an idea from the plot generator thread a while back, right? I honestly didn't think it could be pulled off this well. (Then again I have little to no writing ability so...)

Anyways, that was hilariously cute. The bit with the lady in labor screaming about becoming a lesbian absolutely killed me. XD It's amusing (and notably refreshing) to see Kaoru hitting on Hikaru for a change, too. Thank you for making my day. ^-^

Re: :D

[lalachoy]

Yeah, I didn't think so either. xD But It's kind of evolved into something more.

I'm glad you like it. And I felt there needed to be more stories with Kaoru hitting on Hikaru. There are never enough.

[vollykins]

:DD this seems reaaaally interesting. especially how kaoru seems to be more seme than per usual, which is awesome. i can't help but wonder why tamaki is leading a band of terrorists, or whatever it is.

i like the plot, even if it's a bit confusing right now. continue soon, please? ;D

[lalachoy]

I've noticed everybody loves that the most about this story. Kaoru being more seme. xDD And a lot of things are going to be explained next chapter. But I'm glad you liked it.

[pirate_dingo]

I like iiit! Hikaru's waaay cute, too. You got him so perfect. And I really like how Kaoru is depicted here... I can't wait 'til the next chapter!

[lalachoy]

More seme-ish Kaoru is the way to go! Haha. Thank you.

[mercurial_flux]

Yay for Kaoru hitting on Hikaru! And yeah, you know, I totally get the girlier-twin vibe from him too. I love it when Kaoru acts like the little tease he is~

This is a really interesting idea. (And a multichapter! There are like four decent multichaptered twincest fics out there.) Language and characterization are spot on! Wewt. I want to see where you take this; my interest is definitely piqued.

[lalachoy]

Man, your comments are always able to make me feel better about my stories.

There's more teasing Kaoru where that came from too! Thank you very much and I'm glad you like it.

[call_it_crimson]

Yay~ I'm new to this comm, and this is the first fic I've read here! And I love it too, I like your style. This plot looks like it's going to be alot of fun to read, I can't wait to read more!

[lalachoy]

Welcome to the community! <33 I'm honored that my story was the first you read here and there are tons more that are better!

I'm glad you like my story and thank you for giving me a comment. :D