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[hikaita]

Title: (I can't made the title for this one~~;)
Rate: NC-17
Genre: AU! Angst, Romance
Pairing: YooSu, Vampire!Yoochun Human!Junsu
Summary: “Satan?”Junsu ask with calm and cold tone. “Vampire.” “Kill me.”
The vampire a bit shock to hear Junsu’s words. ‘Is he insane?’Thought the vampire one.
If it’s normal condition Yoochun, the name of that vampire, will

Comments

[nisasha]

finally, i cant post my comment
phew ~~

i like the story, as usual YooSu NC always sweet. hehehe
though, i think the NC part little bit flat.
but overall, i like the sweet, poor, and cute Su-ie ...
:D :D

YooSu <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

[hikaita]

Thanks for reading^^ well, the NC part is well hahahaha me or XiahNiwaKim didn't know what to do, so she make it like that, and I can't edit it since I can't make NC scene :)

Once again thank you^^

[awshin]

Next time edit before posting it up cause there are a few words that is misspelled. Haha! Guess junsu not begging for mercy got yoochun's curiosity. Thank you for posting this!

[hikaita]

(>̯͡.̮<̯͡) mianhae for the typo >< it's my bad english I guess *sigh* thank u for reading :)

[aitoki]

i like the story but there is something i don't understand...
This scene...
“Forget all of that painful memory. I promise to give you a beautiful one. I’ll love you forever.”

Hearing this, Junsu put on gloomy face.

“But I won’t last forever like you are. I’m human and will die sometimes.”

“Then let me make you become like me.”Say Yoochun cup Junsu’s face and make him look into his eyes. “You trust me, right?”

when i read this i thought "huh? isn't junsu is already become immortal???" because before this scene there is this one....

"I still can't believe it. He love someone like me. How? Wait a second, how he safe me? "Yoochun how you safe me?" I look at him.

He look hesitated. "I... I turn you become like me... A vampire..."

My eyes widened. "So... I can't die..."

He look away but nodded. "Mianhae..."

I crying louder now. Why am I still life..."

?????

[hikaita]

Heee?! I'm sorry if it make u confuse... :( well, it's me who's edit the scene didn't look at that part so that part look so weird and confuse...

Thank u for reading and mianhae for make u confuse...may be I'll repost it :( *deep bow*

[ieie_luph]

oh my god.. I love your fiction ^^
su's pregnant...yeaaay...
thx chunie, cz you make junsu happy :D

[hikaita]

thank u for read but I repost the better one...I hope u like it...just a few been change :)

[5_dreamchaser]

Just nice...:)
a happy ending for both su and chun!

[hikaita]

Thank u for reading^^

I repost the better one.... I hope u like it....it not change munch I guess...^^;