He needed to see this. Every inch of Zach's naked, sweat-slick skin; every inch of Chris's tight muscles flexing under the strain of a good, rough fuck; needed this image burned permanently into his memory. Needed it.
Oh fuck I need this too.
He spread his legs further apart, wanting so badly to unzip his jeans and just fucking touch-do something for chrissake-but he didn't dare move…Zach never said he could.
Oh it's totally for chris's sake...
"Yeah he did." Zach replied with a thrust. "So, Eric...Watch...Don't move. Don't speak...Just. Watch." Zach accented each word with a hard thrust deep inside Chris. "I want you to watch while I make Chris come with just my cock...and he will, Eric...Watch him." "I want you to watch me, Eric." Chris panted, and let out a throaty whine. "Watch me come for Zach."
*whimpers*
Zach leaned down over Chris, pressing his weight onto the man's back. He slowly ran his fingers through Chris’s hair, then yanked, hard, and murmured in his ear, “…help him out, Chris…Get on your knees.” oh
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Eeep! You quoted stuff XD. That makes me squee a little bit.
I'm really so thrilled you like it. Seriously. I read it so many times it kept sounding worse and worse in my head and I just had to say, fuck it, it's done.
I'll probably end up sharing it in a day or so. Just gotta work up the nerve XD
Awesome fic! It was exactly what you said it would be, that image HAD to be made into a fic it was practically begging for it really. Ypu can blame Safire for my knowing this fic was here, she said I had to read it and comment so you'd share it with everyone, so this is me doing my bit for the pinto world (beyond showing her the pic in the first place!)
Yet here he was, sitting in a chair directly across from Chris, who was on all fours, naked, on Zach’s bed. Zach was on his knees wearing nothing but his black slim tie and glasses
jeessssuuuusssss. yes please.
i can't even i just. please don't stop writing porn that would be a TRAVESTY.
A travesty? Well goodness, I can't let that happen! Once I've caught up on rest after writing this one I might try my hand at some more *wiggles eyebrows*
Thanks so much for reading and commenting, hun :D. Glad you enjoyed it!
Wow, I don't know why you were so undecided about this. You paint some seriously great visuals! The tie and the glasses (hey, brilliant touch); pressed a flat palm to Chris's back, forcing the other man down roughly onto his forearms; He slowly ran his fingers through Chris’s hair, then yanked, hard, and murmured in his ear, etc.
I really like your style. Its...punchy. :D (oh, slight STXI pun lol) Thought the dialogue added to the whole thing, so wasn't too much of it going on at all and, also, is that final line a deliberate allusion to a sequel? :p Even if not (and I'm quite the Pinto girl at heart), DAMN I could happily get on board a continuation of any sort!
You know, there was originally going to be a smokin blow job scene, but I was seriously too worn out to do it lol. I just didn't have it in me. That's not to say I might not revisit the scene at a later time ;D
Thanks for commenting, bb :D. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It's making me happy that it's gone over so well.
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Oh fuck I need this too.
He spread his legs further apart, wanting so badly to unzip his jeans and just fucking touch-do something for chrissake-but he didn't dare move…Zach never said he could.
Oh it's totally for chris's sake...
"Yeah he did." Zach replied with a thrust. "So, Eric...Watch...Don't move. Don't speak...Just. Watch." Zach accented each word with a hard thrust deep inside Chris. "I want you to watch while I make Chris come with just my cock...and he will, Eric...Watch him."
"I want you to watch me, Eric." Chris panted, and let out a throaty whine. "Watch me come for Zach."
*whimpers*
Zach leaned down over Chris, pressing his weight onto the man's back. He slowly ran his fingers through Chris’s hair, then yanked, hard, and murmured in his ear, “…help him out, Chris…Get on your knees.” oh ( ... )
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I'm really so thrilled you like it. Seriously. I read it so many times it kept sounding worse and worse in my head and I just had to say, fuck it, it's done.
I'll probably end up sharing it in a day or so. Just gotta work up the nerve XD
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*runs off to reread*
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Thanks for all your help on it, bb! *hugs*
And yayz! A keysmash! Those things never get old XD
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I think you all are breaking down my defenses and forcing me to go ahead share it with the rest of Pintoland XD
I suppose it'd be awfully selfish of me not to *nods*
I thank you very much, fair maiden, for sharing that picture with dear Safire. Otherwise, this story would not exist XD
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Yet here he was, sitting in a chair directly across from Chris, who was on all fours, naked, on Zach’s bed. Zach was on his knees wearing nothing but his black slim tie and glasses
jeessssuuuusssss. yes please.
i can't even i just. please don't stop writing porn that would be a TRAVESTY.
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Thanks so much for reading and commenting, hun :D. Glad you enjoyed it!
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I really like your style. Its...punchy. :D (oh, slight STXI pun lol) Thought the dialogue added to the whole thing, so wasn't too much of it going on at all and, also, is that final line a deliberate allusion to a sequel? :p Even if not (and I'm quite the Pinto girl at heart), DAMN I could happily get on board a continuation of any sort!
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You know, there was originally going to be a smokin blow job scene, but I was seriously too worn out to do it lol. I just didn't have it in me. That's not to say I might not revisit the scene at a later time ;D
Thanks for commenting, bb :D. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It's making me happy that it's gone over so well.
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