Comments | high_flyer87: fic: "Remember Me" - Sam/Dean

high_flyer87

fic: "Remember Me" - Sam/Dean - PG

Feb 21, 2013 23:23

TItle: Remember Me
Fandom: Supernatural
Pairing: Sam/Dean (also hints at Wincestiel)
Rating: PG
Warning: Some language, a shot of soulless!Sam, slight angst, alternating POV's
Spoilers: If you've watched through s6 you're good
Length: 1,529
Summary: It had been so easy in the end, getting Sam's soul back.
A/N: This was written for babykid528, who is ( Read more... )

fanfic, pairing: sam&dean, pairing: dean&cas&sam, supernatural

Comments 3

babykid528 February 22 2013, 22:03:18 UTC

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Youuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Can I just say how much I love long sentences (which I'm pretty sure you know), so from the very first sentence I was in love with this!!!

And then:

He pushed his fingers back through Sam’s long hair, brushing the soft strands out of his eyes. He let his hand trail gently down the side of Sam’s face, running his thumb absentmindedly along Sam’s bottom lip, parting it slightly, with a soft, distracted, press and pull of his thumb.

And:

Castiel smiled, and when Dean’s hand slowly slipped away from his, their fingers tangled together for a moment, before Dean’s hand gently settled back on his brother's chest, and Castiel left on a whisper of displaced air in the quiet motel room.

And Dean breathing Sammy in!!!!!

Just, fuck your way with words!!!! <33333333333333333333

This is SO FUCKING GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD BEST PRESENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *CUDDLE ATTACK*

high_flyer87 February 22 2013, 22:59:54 UTC

*SQUISH* I LOVE YOU AND I'M SO GLAD YOU ENJOYED THIS. YOURS IS THE ONLY OPINION THAT MATTERS.

I am the unintentional queen of long sentences! It may be bad writing? Idk. You like them and that's all that matters.

babykid528 February 22 2013, 23:20:00 UTC

YAY! I LIKE BEING THE ONLY OPINION THAT MATTERS!!!! XD (I almost exclusively write for you anymore, so yours is the only opinion that matters as far as I'm concerned too. <3)

Dude, Faulkner is the champion of long sentences. And since I LURVE him, I write long sentences all day long. lol! I say make ALL the sentences as long or as short as you want. Fuck grammar and fuck societal norms. ;-)