Crack Pairings 003

Feb 01, 2011 23:36

                Sam Winchester was grumpy and bored.

He had a quiz tomorrow, he had an essay to revise, he had two chapters to read, he had sleep to catch up on, and despite all of that here he was at a bar. It was noisy and crowded and smoky and everyone was drunk except for Sam. It was never an enjoyable position, being the only ( Read more... )

fanfic, crack pairings, supernatural

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telaryn February 2 2011, 15:45:50 UTC
Hee! Love it!

(Only one question - I'm not sure Sam at this stage would equate Dean and "cruel". "Broken", yes. Cruel? That's more S4 - S6 Sam.)

Otherwise awesome flow, language, dynamics - everything! And I *love* his assessment of Darla and how he really can't shake his hunter instincts even in the middle of being glamoured and in one of the most normal settings possible.

Great job!

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hickumu February 2 2011, 16:26:14 UTC
Edited! Is "abnormal" more appropriate, under the circumstances?

*hugs* I'm really glad it was up to par! It felt good to finish, too.

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telaryn February 2 2011, 19:44:58 UTC
I'm sure it did! And yeah - I could live with "abnormal" a lot better than "cruel".

Awesome job! *smooch*

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hickumu February 3 2011, 03:44:33 UTC
Do you have a better adjective to recommend?

One more crack pairing checked off the list! *happy dance*

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