So, this is the gratuitously porny AU of an AU which was itself gratuitously porny to begin with. It may be the porniest thing I've ever written, though I suppose that would depend on how you measure porniness. It's at least in the top three.
Beta'd as usual by the incomparable
new_kate ♥
In which Joe meets Len in (
January, 1989 )
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I just found the Austinverse and came wandering over here to see if you wrote anything else (because that's the beauty of link-hopping *grin*) and I find this!! How wonderful.
I love the atmosphere you created here. The rain and the car and the lights and then the rest stop... each one progressively adds to the heavy anticipation for Joe and Len. I could almost feel the tension vibrating between them. And Len's awkwardness is so perfect!!
And the sex is just mind-blowingly hot. Seriously. This one has earned a place in my hard-drive somewhere for definite re-reading.
And even though it seems to have been written exclusively for the porn (*smirk*) there is still so many shades of both the original Joe and Len as well as Gojyo and Hakkai... well. Thank you. I enjoyed this story far, far too much. I think I'll go read it again now.
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Well, what will probably happen in future is that the plot will wake up, glance blearily at the clock and go, "I'm late!!" It will then proceed to bug you mercilessly until you agree to do Part 2 so that the plot won't feel left out.
*nods*
And then the porn will sidle up and whisper seductively in your ear until you end up putting both plot and porn into Part 2 (which is as it should be) and then things will finally settle down again. *snicker*
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