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hiasobi

[fic] Hearts 6/?

May 25, 2008 01:18

Title: Hearts 6/?
Fandom:FFVII/Kingdom Hearts I
Summery: Sixteen to gain. Eighteen to save the world. Nineteen to lose everything. [a handful of the spherical objects] Yuffie, Cloud, Cid, and everything lost.

( Some things are hers, others just don’t realize it )

crossover, ffvii, kh, yuffentine, clouffie

Comments 5

shiegra May 25 2008, 07:35:55 UTC

Ooooh, yes.

I love the emotional currents here, Yuffie and Cloud and the rest of them on the sidelines in a way and feeling it but not quite able to pinpoint it. And Cid. And the cigarettes. And fighting back!

And Yuffie's puppy dog eyes, hee.

hiasobi May 26 2008, 02:37:33 UTC

Haha, I love messing with their heads and confusing the rest of them with what appears to be random!butreallymeaningful Cloud and Yuffie interaction. And I just couldn't resist the cigarettes anymore. FFVII Cid just isn't Cid without his chimney smoke.

sansukumile May 25 2008, 17:26:52 UTC

Oh. Oh, gawd, you updated, I almost cried tears of joy. If I wasn't already pining after Sephiroth I would propose right now ( ... )

hiasobi May 26 2008, 02:35:12 UTC

Thanks for the priase! And doubly thanks for the CC. XD

Yes, Kairi as Marlene and Riku as Kadaj reminders have crossed my mind (and is planned ot be in later chapters) but one problem that I have with writng the two of them is (as mentioned) I never acutally played the game so I don't really have the personalities of Sora, Riku, and Kairi down. They will have stronger(?) roles later but for now I thought I'd play it safe until I read up on the three of them XD. I aso thought of including Donald and Goofy but I think I have enough characters and just trying ot give them enough screen time is already wrecking hovac @_@.

And yeah, I have the next chapter sort-of outlined in my head, so it shouldn't be too long before it gets posted. But again, I really need to get the Keyblade weilder's down before I can write them *grumbles*.

And I also really need to look up FFVIII so Squall can have some friends! XD

ambivalentapple August 1 2008, 04:00:45 UTC

This is such a touching fic i am in love with it (as in head over heels) do you plan to continue it? i desperately hope so...I'm so hyped up from the emotion its so gah i don't have a word for it.