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dejaspirit in hhr_serendipity

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Sep 30, 2005 13:15

Author: light_music formerly known as msscribe ( Read more... )

Comments 25

genealogygirl September 30 2005, 22:32:54 UTC

Oh very nice! Loved the bantering .... I wish I could create bantering dialogue. Ah well.

So, I couldn't tell .... were Ron and Hermione involved at this point or not?

renata_hpjc September 30 2005, 23:26:53 UTC

Yay! This was one of my prompts -- thanks for doing it so well! I like how understated it was. And the boob lines, the boob lines were good. :)

sbertie October 1 2005, 00:06:47 UTC

OMFG! HILARIOUS! HOT! YOU WIN!

lol, great job, really, honestly and sincerely! I loved it, if you couldn't tell from my comments. *g*

caalan October 1 2005, 04:35:39 UTC

Two boobs to rule them all, Two boobs to blind them, One Amazing Wonderbra to make one true cleavage to bind them!

*snorts* I LOVED IT! Guys are such suckers for that measurement! ;)

zorb October 1 2005, 19:08:10 UTC

The cleavage will take over the world! Mwahaha, I love it. I also loved this line: We are so close that kissing her doesn’t even feel like ‘moving forward’.

Great job!