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FIC: Standing Still

Nov 06, 2005 14:29

Author: Nitya/nousia
Title: Standing Still
Prompt: Fred and George stir up trouble within the trio for fun. Harry is embarrassed, Ron is pissed off. Hermione slaps a Weasley, or two.
Summary: You can never expect anything from me. You can't depend on me. At some point I'll always let you down.
Warning: Ron's a grade A prat in this fic. More so than how ( Read more... )

Comments 23

ogiraffe November 7 2005, 01:29:48 UTC

Nitya!!

That was- that was just...amazing! I loved it so much :)

and xD orgasmic pleasure :P

yukikumiko November 7 2005, 08:44:32 UTC

Oh Nitya. *sighs* That was great! I loved how you developed Hermione so well, and explained her actions in HBP, which to me were very off as well. This summed up what I was thinking: "How I let you down, but you were always there whenever I needed you. Quite a turnabout, isn't it?"

Rofl at the orgasmic pleasure Ron takes in food. Hehe.

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nousia November 9 2005, 02:40:37 UTC

Thanks, Spaz!

Let's just pretend that hot little Ginny (eech) doesn't exist? Since really she's nothing but a plot device.

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nousia November 9 2005, 21:27:47 UTC

Exactly. And of course JKR only tells, but never shows. That was one of the biggest flaws for Harry and Ginny. .. Right. And why am I saying this in the first place? *kicks self*

Hermione on the other hand... that one always had a personality from the start.

Agreed. :)

fated_addiction November 7 2005, 21:01:42 UTC

*tackles* NITYA!

We're going to have to greet each other this way from now on, you know. Anyways.

This was lovely, lovely, lovely. I'm so glad Hermione smacked Ron, words cannot express my happiness. So with that being said. I love this. I love the smooth progression. I love Hermione's constant struggle between the awkwardness and her sureness.

I even like Fred and George. *laughs*

Brilliant.

And I love you.

bingblot November 8 2005, 01:40:28 UTC

Oh this was so brilliant!!! I loved it! I loved Fred and George's prank and how Harry asks Hermione to 'drop the act'.
Even love Hermione slapping Ron (he deserved it for saying what he did!) and love how Harry and Hermione both just understand- it was what they were meant for all along.
Also brilliant job explaining HBP. Exactly!

Love, love, love this.