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yinepu in hh_sugarquill

Fic

Jul 05, 2008 13:40

Title: Honor
Summary: Antonin and the Prewetts meet for the last time
Characters/Pairings: Antonin Dolohov, Fabian and Gideon Prewett, mentions of other unnamed Death Eaters and Voldemort
Genre: Drama?
Rating/Warnings: PG-13 (death)
Word Count: 1132
As an aside, I wrote this in response to (and inspired by) alohachary1851’s A Normal Day. It is ( Read more... )

character: fabian prewett, character: gideon prewett, creator: yinepu, character: antonin dolohov, rating: pg-13, form: fic

Comments 13

alohachary1851 July 5 2008, 18:51:28 UTC

wow. I have no other words to describe it over all.
I did love this: “Brothers Prewett, this-”

“‘Brothers Prewett’?” came a derisive snort. “Are we in a fairy tale, Gid?”

“Rubbish! I don’t believe in magic, my dear Fabian.”

you also make me want to write again, I've been VERY uninspired lately.

yinepu July 7 2008, 04:28:57 UTC

That means you liked it?

Yeah, I've noticed silence from your fiction corner. Then again, it's not like I'm churning out quality fiction every other day. Besides, I TOTALLY can't write comedy so...yeah.

pack1ife July 5 2008, 19:25:23 UTC

“We lost some good men,” said the younger wizard.

“Did we,” Antonin said blankly.

I like your Dolohov. A little more than just a cruel barbarian. I especially love his comments about women.

yinepu July 7 2008, 04:29:21 UTC

Thank you! Yes, he's old fashioned, which comes with all the trappings, good and bad.

valkyrie_lisa July 5 2008, 20:08:20 UTC

Very interesting and well-written. It's nice to see a three-dimensional death eater. I'd like to read more stories about Dolohov now.

yinepu July 7 2008, 04:30:11 UTC

I'd like to be able to provide you with them! I don't actually know if there's any quality Dolohov fic out there to recommend to you. And thanks for reading!

valkyrie_lisa July 7 2008, 15:28:20 UTC

Then I guess you'll just have to write more. *taps foot impatiently*

Oh, I'm just kidding.

Sort of.

;)

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yinepu July 7 2008, 04:30:41 UTC

Thank you so much for reading! Just spreading the Dolohov love :D

msninacat July 6 2008, 06:44:02 UTC

Wow! Keep it up! I love the disreguard Dolohov has for the newer Death Eaters because they aren't an original Knight like he was. I can see where he went along with Riddle's original intentions as opposed to Voldermort's new desperation. I could probably keep gushing but it would probably only make sense to me.

yinepu July 7 2008, 04:31:57 UTC

Yay! Yes, I tried to make him old school. I imagine Riddle gained his early following from his skills and beliefs, not cold-blooded murder, so I always imaged the Knights were a very different breed from the Death Eaters.

I like hearing gushing! And thanks for reading :)

msninacat July 7 2008, 04:36:45 UTC

I completely agree. I really liked your attention to detail on that point. I think Riddle truly became Voldemort when he embraced that fear of death full on.